Sir Fredrick of England the second: The gun master

beautifully written, lovely story author keep it up...

Only way I see this having been picked is due to the ease of translation. Half the novel is word filler of repeated messages about his element points that aren't even different, his whole point of getting strong is for his new fiancée that he gets in chapter 1 yet you don't see her for 10 chapters at a time. I think his fiancée has less screen time than her own father. The love enemy fodder 'Donald' has more screen time than the fiancée despite dying randomly 15 chapters in. He had 1,000 failures towards smithing in a row, yet once he gets the system he hasn't failed without forced interuption. No explanation as to why he suddenly turned into a god smith. System didn't give him any smithing  talent. All it did was make him stronger, which mind you, we don't even know the combat system. All we know is that the novel is not good.

I love the novel so far and bear cub is so cute!!!! 😍

It's like the author is 10 and has never got a Christmas present so he processed his sad live with this story where he gets everything for free. The characters are bad the story has 2 sides good and bad but nothing between. The Mc is like a child himself and I can say for sure that when I was 20 I was not like him. The dialogs needs improvement. I can understand that the author wants to create something that we haven't read a 100 times but to say hey I want it here you have it for free is not the best way in my opinion. After a month he is the strongest person on the continent, well I can life with that but than improve the background story and the plot

It's a good story, but can be said to move too fast, as the mc gets powerful really fast, and other than the fact that chapters take a while to come out, but if you don't mind, then I would recommend it.

Typical CN trash, not only does it include CN delusion and CN nazi ideals but also the incompetent assclown couldn't even be bothered to get the timeline right and it's not just "slightly" wrong, it's utterly demolished making the plot fucktarded.

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