Shadows of Aetheria:The unremarkable boy and the shadow system

Review as of chapter 42: Its the classical "reborn as the villain in the story"  but its pretty well done. The Mc is thoughtfull and clever but the "theoretical mc" has a lot of karma on his side. Lets hope they take it out of trial eventually.

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This is something new and refreshing and i would love to read More... The writing quality is good and The author is doing great job,give it a try guys, i am sure you will be hooked after reading first chapter...

Honestly this wouldve been a good story if the MC wasnt a idiot. Like my guy got enslaved and abused and he just accepts it like its normal.. If it were me I would try to escape because from what I can see all her class did was bring him back to life and connect their mana, her orders can still be ignored as we have seen already, he can literally just escape and she cant do anything. The romance is honestly forced because of the above reason man, if you were going to have him be a zombie to her then at least make it so that she is originally his friend that way he wouldnt have a problem protecting her when he got revived :/ Writing Quality - 4 Stability - 3 Story Dev - 2 Character design - 2 World Background - 2

Fast paced and everything is ok-ish...But sometimes I question whether I reading English or other language....Pls,pls,pls improve your writing quality or you will keep losing your potential readers

I loved this novel, but I need more than what was left by the ending. What happened after yin stabbed himself in the heart? What is the meaning of the system saying live and then the author stating it's too late for that. we know he's dead, but was he given the proper honor he deserved, or was there a way for yin to return through the system? So many questions left unanswered.

After reading this novel my only problem is that it lacks enough quality in writing. I like how the story is being told and the development so far, it's just that I am not satisfy with how the author construct his sentence and paragraphs. There's always something lacking when I read it. Though, overall, I don't have any problem with them. This just my own opinion, so please don't take any offense Author. I like your work, just please improve your writing

Right, so this is a great story, with long chapters, and plenty of character development, world development, a lot of interesting plot, good character design, and the thing is actually readable. Oh, and there are a few really hatable characters in the book too. You know, the kind where you with you could break into that world and find and punch said people. Anyway, you should probably read this.