sexy step daddy

I have to say that this story is really interesting, intriguing and quite unique. If you like the TV show Storage Wars, then you'll probably get hooked with this novel. Please give it a try and support the team translatong ^_^

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its lack luster.. if you don't have anything to read then try otherwise not worth it.. there are many more novels with similar setting who have done a far better job than this

I have read 75 chapters from the raw, other than how easy the mc got what he needed, the novel has very few weak points....................

To start with this story has a different way of going about things than most stories which isnt bad at all but being as light hearted as it has been it needs to either add a good amount  of comedy or wit to carry it to betterment as only being lighthearted is horrible for a story in the long run.The personalities of the the mc and the women are fleshed out enough and frankly much better than the majority of the other webnovel novels have, but its gotten to mushy and the way the self confidence or any behaviour is shown between them has become repeated and is just making the story weak at this point, at this point the main characters need to be treated as normal people and behave normally rather than this stuff.The cultivation level jumping was already exaggerated and has since become just nonsense at this point since they got that chaos energy stuff, this has to been reduced at the divine realm to a normaler degree because rigjt now its just a pathetic joke the way theyre jumping entire realms. Just because every other novel makes the mc jump stages doesnt mean it has to be done and if it has to then certainly not like this.To summarize not bad for a novel just with issues which need to be fixed asap to stop it from becoming worse.

author at least make him rich in shadow for destroying roman family was easy for him, he was terrorist and adult in past life he should know the danger bring fighting like roman who has powerful family backing

I just blazed through the entire story today and the quality of the story is amazing! The character interactions are depicted really well and I think that the personalities are introduced organically. I'm looking forward to how the story develops. Author, please keep up the good work!

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