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Wonderful story. For a military book, it doesn't come off as nationalistic. That's a big plus for me. Hope this doesn't change because it can be really off-putting at times.

Actually, I can spot the writer's improvement in writing through the chapters. First, I really appreciate you trying to improve for the sake of getting a better read. Second, you developed a very unique style that kept me hooked to the story till the end. This is fresh, captivating, and promising. The plot is really exciting. I feel this has more plot twists and surprises to come. I'm looking forward for more!

I'll be honest the beginning of the story is quite interesting but the longer I read it gets boring. mc lives just running away, the typical coward mc who believes himself if he runs away his woman will be safe even though the woman can make a big organization with effort and practice, and mc barely  never trained to increase his strength mc was just adventuring to find a new harem and get plot armor, and mc is a true hypocrite he always saves women be it bad or good and mc will ignore anyone as long as it's a boy.  mc is a typical kid who thinks he's an adult because he's killed people.  and for people who want to read this novel, make sure you really don't read any more novels because this novel is just to spend free time waiting for another novel to be released.  I hope the harems that MC left behind get a man who has a backbone, not a cowardly kid, I hope this novel becomes an NTR so that other women can be happy instead of waiting for a stupid mc who travels the world looking for a new harem again.

It's a great book, fighting author, it's a book to imagine yourself being in a war, highly recommendable for everyone to read and learn that when it comes to achieving a common goal, that what I learned in the first two chapters. Am gonna read more

This is done as part of a review swap, but I haven't finished the entire 100 chapters. It’s not because the story is not good but I figured by the time I could finish all posted chapters, it would take me a month or something. By the way, this is the first five star review I’ve ever given. As of writing this review, I'm only at Chapter 26. Updates: Don’t really have any issues with update speed since I can’t even manage to read all chapters yet.Writing: Your writing is excellent with a strong list of vocabulary. I could perfectly envision the world through your narration. There were a few minor errors such as incorrect punctuations for dialogues, but it didn’t impede my reading comprehension at all. For example:Original >> "Alek-sandros." She said his name while testing it on her tongue.Edited >> "Alek-sandros,” she said his name while testing it on her tongue.Characters: I like the slow build-up of the MC. The MC is intelligent, resourceful, meticulous but also vengeful and ambitious. I wouldn’t necessarily call him the typical protagonist. He seems more of an antihero to me, but it’s always a lot more fun to read a protagonist that isn’t black and white. Lenia intrigues me as well. I love how ‘inexperienced’ and ‘childlike’ she is in the beginning but gradually, she is learning to become more individualized.World design: The world is still being built and we learn a little more about the world as each chapter progresses. I haven’t read all the chapters so I can’t say much, but as of now, I really enjoy the world design. There are some mysteries surrounding the world, but I think this is where I’ll have to read more chapters to uncover the world’s mysteries.Story development: Since I’m barely halfway through the story, I can only comment up to what I’ve read and so far, the story development is fantastic. Even when I was at chapter 12, I thought everything was well paced (be it story or character development) so I totally don’t understand why some reviewers were giving this story a bad review. A good story always takes time to build its character and plot. I’m glad you are taking your time to do so and not jumping the gun. All in all, it is a well-written and well-developed story with enough mysteries and action to keep you wanting for more. I’m definitely going to keep this story in my library and finish up the rest of the chapters! I’m so excited to read the rest of the chapters. MUST READ.BELOW ARE MY CONJECTURES AND CONTAINS A LOT OF SPOILER (I couldn’t stop myself from commenting on some things so forgive me for the essay-like response. Also forgive me if I got these religious reference and/or lore incorrect as I’m not an expert in this area. I merely did some rudimentary research on the subject): Reading all these comments criticizing you about how difficult it was to get through the first 10 chapters, which was super short and barely enough time for any real development in my opinion, made me super confused about the harsh/biased comments. So I decided to go back and re-read the beginning chapters and even did my own side research on this whole Tower of Babel, which I had no knowledge of beforehand. And boy were there surprises for me. Obviously there might be a chance that this is all in my head and I’m just overanalyzing.After researching what the events surrounding the Tower of Babel was, I think I could understand the beginning (seemingly confusing) chapters. According to wiki, the story of the Tower of Babel (in the Book of Genesis) happened after the Great Flood and was during a time where there was only one single human race, where everyone spoke the same universal language. However, due to pride and arrogance, the humans built the Tower of Babel to reach the gods, which infuriated the gods. God punished them by dividing humankind into different race and cultures. In the beginning chapters with the two soldiers showed the MC (aka the mysterious “soul”) being killed and then his soul fled and ended up revisiting/recalling his first initial life as An-Namrud—the life that set everything in motion henceforth. An-Namrud, the Arabic name for Nimrod, the king that supposedly rebelled against god and said to be Noah’s descendent (and when the system popped up telling the MC his class was “Human Ascendent”). Clearly from the beginning we can see the MC and Ishmael failed to defy the gods and was punished instead, one to be imprisoned in a mask and the other to suffer the continuous pains of reincarnation. Then the scene flashes to the husband and wife. It might be to illustrate the unintended ‘loophole’ and the birth of the “soul eater” because next, we see the “soul” going back to that reincarnation plane with their mini conversation before the soul is reincarnated again, this time into Aleksandros. Something obviously went wrong here because he retained his memory. As for Aleksandra and Lenia, I was weirded out by the creation scene in the brothel house. But then, I wondered, are they some kind of allusion to Adam and Eve and the Garden of Eden? The image is just too similar. There was no need for Aleksandro to be undressed when all he did was use blood from his arm. So why go the extra mile to add in the description about the unabashed nakedness? Garden of Eden…paradise of pleasure…what symbolizes it than the brothel house? Eve was created to be Adam’s companion similarly to how Aleksandros created Lenia to be his second-in-command. Out of curiosity, I searched up the meaning of Aleksandros and came to “to defend man” whereas Lenia was linked to Helena/Magdalene…Mary Magdalene who was viewed as the sinful/promiscuous woman and former prostitute? Certainly this can’t all be a coincidence? I also wonder if the jealousy trait will end up being “the forbidden fruit”? There already seems to be a foreshadowing of the consequences of Lenia’s free will. I fell like all that leveling up thing, although fun, needs to be peeled away to discover the hidden themes underneath. There's so many allusions and references to lore and traditions, etc. Of course, since I'm only on chapter 26, I could be dead wrong about all of this but these are thoughts that kept nagging at me and I had to put it down. Anyways, this is already in my library and I will be slowly finishing the rest of the chapters :) By the way, this isn't usually my type of genre but I'm so freaking intrigued so I'll be following it. I love a novel that shocks my brain.

DONT BOTHER TO READ ITMC gets his body taken over in over 1000+ chapters and he starts again with no dimension, no bloodline, no beast, jsut crippled body, all his efforts gone down the drain because of some stupid decisions, the "Dayus" player he bashed and beat up schemed against him which led to his body being taken over, he lsot everything and probably gonna take 300 chapters to recover everything, so basically, the story(chapter1-1250), filler(1251-1400+).

May God bless you with complete and speedy recovery

The months spent in close contact with the man had assured him of the fact. If anything, All Might was the harshest towards himself. The man still had his fits of depression, but he hid it well. If Izuku didn't have his Quirk which had seemed to manifest this empathy – Izuku shuddered at the thought. He didn't want to dwell on the futures that could have been, because they were living in the present. All the what-ifs would drive him crazy before long, just like how he'd been driven to desperation months prior.