Salute To Indian Army

Really enjoyed the first chapter I can't wait to read more of it in the future. I've been looking for a good novel like this that has sports but not one that has a system. This is something new and I'm willing to sit back and read this story as the days go by.

Other than a proofreader or a little more self editing not much else to do but really I only spot 1 or 2 mistakes/misspellings that don't really affect much. Overall it is very well done and a great read.Grammarly extension may help to but again these are really minor mistakes hardly worth mentioning. However if it was me I would have wanted to know. Once again keep up the great work I look forward to the next chapter.

The culture of the Impero rewards people like that, and the qualities that are characteristic of that disease are the exact opposite.

Uh, it's definitely not my fault okay? Nope, not at all.

Liam shrugged and started rowing.

"Oh! that looks great on you" Ellaine said looking at Charles

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Great book, asome.         

I love this novel!!!Well-written and the strong protagonist is like none otherDefinitely recommending this novel

Di baleng talentless ..At least pogi hahahahahahahaha hahaha

make mc absolutely insanely handsome by awakening somthing inside him and it will make more impact on his villain side when he goes to any place female leads will have attraction towards mc so those son of heaven will have jealousy towards mc. and it will make story more believable or it won't after all female leads  won't get attracted to just good looking guy after all they are always played by fate