Rise of Myriad Magic Emperor

I noped out as I've seen a few too many LNs with bad editing. It honestly seems promising. With the corona virus epidemic, depression has been at an all time high. So bad editing now bothers me more so than it used to.

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I think i could absolutely enjoy your story but the grammar is really bad. I am sorry that i am saying it this direct, but maybe you have a friend or someone you know who can help. Otherwise try to find someone online who would help you and continue writing!

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Great storyline and characters. The story is easy to understand and follow and I haven’t gotten bored of it in the slightest. Definitely recommend to friends or whoever is reading this.

I really liked the story, but it's impossible to read with all these grammar errors and poor editing. I feel it would be an easier fix than just having a bad story. I hope the author looks into getting either a better editor or get a programm checking the grammar

This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.

Lost a lot of brain cells reading this, the world building is prettg nice, but after chap 21 I couldnt keep going with the other aspects.

If you feel like it and has a lot of time to waste, you can read this, if not, well...
You SHOULD get another one to invest your valuable time.

It is pretty good,the grammar isn't the best but I just try to over look that and when I do you story is pretty good,the characters are alright and the MC has a good personality. MC is a little stupid at times but that is bound to happen because he is just a kid. All and all not to bad of a story.

Honestly grammar is pretty bad, and could use better spacing, but overall it's pretty good. I would recommend this only if you're bored because it's kinda cliche tho.

I was drawn into the due how smooth everything was and how reasonable it was but after finding out that mc basically can't have any children just cause he awakened his bloodline it was kinda like a buzz plus I saw harem and r-18 In tags so  I don't know if I want to continue or not cause honestly I don't see the point of being in a relationship with multiple girls if you can't have children it just seems to like that'll be boring like for all that he might as well put all his focus on getting stronger

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