Revenge Reincarnation

Author of "Green Life" here! I would appreciate if you could rate my work if you enjoy reading it!!😀😀😋------------------------------------------

Story was kinda interesting at the start, then Chapter 10 happened, the MC went full retard. Not only did he use Shikai form of his sword, he was also less than a second from using Bankai. All so he can intimidate his weak ass clan, he completely exposed himself as something not normal in this world by using a power outside of profound energy.I can possibly accept this kinda response from the original Xiao Che who was naive and knew nothing of the powers of the world. But this came from a modern day MC who knows the whole power dynamic of the current world he inhabits.Even with this, I soldiered on and kept reading...bad idea obviously.Chap 13: Robs his clan and runs off leaving his Grandpa and Little Aunt to fend for themselves....cause why not.Chap 19-20: His decides he should fuse his Spirit and Body cultivation, problem is his Body is lvl 1 and Spirit is lv 31. He says it would take weeks to get his Body up to the same level but who has time for that? So instead he nerfed himself back to lvl 1 Spirit.Chap 23: 6 Months has passed and the MC has been traing and killing monsters in the forest. He recovered only to lvl 19 with 6 M.O.N.T.H.S of training and killing.....😑Chap 24: MC kills one monster that is lvl 29 and gains 4 levels....W.T.F 🤬, making him lv 23 now....this happened in one day.Chap 28-29: One month has passed, MC is lvl 32😑. He gets a quest to get the Fire Seed, the lvl req. of the quest is 60 because of the lvl 70+ Dragon guarding it. Instead of using his abilities to just speed run in and grab the seed and leave, he decides he needs to kill the dragon for the exp😑.....*sigh*Chap 30: MC uses his Bankai and disturbs the whole fucking world (He knows that this will happen). MC has now completely exposed himself to every major power in the world and some outside it.I completely stopped at this point, was just getting a bit too much for me. After going full retard in Chapter 10 he never seemed to recover...sad😭

I am giving this an overall 2.6 because your quality of writing needs work, you have so many mistakes in every chapter. Your story development is a 3 out of 5 because the story is decent. The characters are great but still 4 out of 5. and the other 2 i rated 2 out of 5. You might not like hearing this but to make this novel better you need to go back to the beginning and fix all your mistakes. The character level keeps jumping around. He gains levels, but then he somehow loses levels. You are the second most inconsistent author i met. I do like your story though so even with all your faults i am continuing on.

The plot so far (30 chapters in) : a guy is reincarnated as a prince in a cultivation world anD, because of a fortune-teller's warning that he is an ill-omened curse on the royal family, is locked up in a cold palace for 15 years and is forbidden to cultivate. In his teens he awakens a sign in system and starts cultivating. At the same time the nation is going through wars and princes are dying off, and the king blames the MC because of the fortune telling.I'm not a fan of this version of the story (there are at least two other recent sign in novels that have the same bones of the plot), because it drags. Entire chapters are spent on the MC navel gazing about cultivation, then entire more chapters are spent with the MC offscreen while side characters talk on and on. Despite the tedious focus on talking about cultivating and cultivation levels, the power levels aren't clear to me, and I'm not interested to learn more. This novel just seems phoned in, and not worth the effort of reading.

Not very well written, the novel is very simplistic that it's pretty terrible. There's only two sides in this story from what I have read so far(20+) there's the main character side and the antagonist side. The antagonists side is very boring and underdeveloped where they hate the main character because the antagonists are small minded. I do not recommend reading this if you want actually depth to your story or a good plot.

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So this is another Apocalypse novel where the mc is a naive idiot that gets betrayed by people he tried to help.So he turns bad and gets revenge by hitting phat ass.So mc sets out to get a harem while basicly eating zombie brains for power.

Pretty much garbage. It's poorly translated. If that was all there was to it I may be able to give it somewhat of a pass, but unfortunately the content is just as poor as the translation.