It was just a game; one Evan indulged in excessively, but ultimately, it remained a game. At least, that’s what it was supposed to be...
However, on the day the main quest concluded, he discovered it was far more than just a game. The world of Aidos was real, and the demon threat was even more so. He was chosen by the god who created the game to lead the new generation of heroes and save the world from the demon invasion.
Unfortunately, nothing was as straightforward as it seemed. As the truth behind the invasion and the previous Seven Heroes unraveled, he began to question his choices. He started wondering if the demons were truly the enemies of Aidos. This doubt intensified when he uncovered a new truth: he might not be who he thought he was.
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This novel is a work of fiction and draws inspiration from historical places and events, but it is not meant to be a realistic representation of any current or historical events, places, cultures, or people. The story may contain themes and events that could be disturbing to some readers. If you are easily "triggered" by various topics, this story may not be suitable for you, as I will not limit myself in terms of themes, events, or topics while writing.
I mean you talked about extremely high level beings and their encounters with mc in 100-200 chapters and he's still not even level 500 even at around 700 chapters. By the time he'll reach level 900-1000 and even a higher existence after that like the gods or whatever he is the story will already be 2000+ chapters .
I don't particularly dislike long stories but this one got boring around chapter 150.
Venti…. Im just here for venti.
Venti…. Im just here for venti.
Venti…. Im just here for venti.
Venti…. Im just here for venti.
Venti…. Im just here for venti.
And yes, I’m shameless enough to give myself five stars. ✨
This is my second novel and my entry for WSA 2022.
I hope y’all support me!🙂✨
Also, constructive criticisms are allowed🥲
Just mediocre all around
bunch of info dumps and system stuff that is never interesting
world just feels like mediocre jrpg
no interactions between characters basically, be it positive or negative
characters are uninteresting be it mc or his fiancee, there isn't really any more currently (the gods I guess but they are like meh)
handful of copy pasting a part of a previous chapter as if we can't scroll up, basically just increasing word count(just this behavior justifies dropping)
is it possible that after another dozen+ chapter is will become much better, absolutely. actually chances are pretty high seeing as currently there nothing worth reading about this, so it can only get better from here.
its just too boring wading through mediocrity.
would not recommend but it can be read I guess, just don't expect much or anything at all for at least 20 chapters.
The prologue caught my attention and made me unable to tear my eyes away from this title