Reborn Revenge in the Urban Fa

average system xianxia transmigration... nothing really new or outstanding in this one... plus it is completed. compared to trash webnovel has been putting out lately this one can be considered masterpiece... and it has ok translations...

typical and sad _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ meaning ~ just like every novel with the same theme and concept, the MC is just meh, so much for two lifetime of experience the attitude does not show it at all pretty much like a copy paste of that other one with the same style, although that one has a slightly better MC

I started this book as a third book to keep me occupied while my other books updated.Boy am I glad I started reading this! it's got a somewhat generic beginning, however it quickly becomes something more.The author is doing an amazing job with world building and character development so far and the author is open to suggestion. There are twists and turns that make this book really enjoyable and I like reading this much more than my other books currently. This would be a perfect 5 out of 5 except for one minor thing that happens in the middle of the book but it's literally only one chapter and I'm very glad that I kept reading.

Writing quality 4Story development 3Character design 2Updating stability- I guess it depends but I give a 3 stars.World backround 4.I'm not really an expert in terms of reviewing works but I'm still going to give my opinion?I guess.Writing Quality is decent and readable, although there's some grammatical errors It was still fine. I like the writing style based 1st person perspective so I give 4 stars.The story development for me is pretty off that's why I just gave 3 stars in this aspect. The story is very slow paced and It makes the reader feel bored. Me personally like slow pace to catch up the details and some stuffs. But slowing the progress too match will leave the bad taste to those people reading it. I highly suggest to learn how to control the pacing, Fast , Slow and etc to assure the reader is still in the story.Character development is really not good for my opinion. At first I thought he was just a chill guy wanting peace and sort of playing video games with his friend. But after some events it was highly showed the he is the most loser , beta mc that I've ever read in my whole life. His personality is really sucks like in a bad way that it affects the readers mind. His decision is hilarious to the point I want to beat him up. I think It's okay to make him like a average person....but too much and making him like a sore loser just holding the potential of the story. At first he was bullied so he will decide to change into a new different person but still after all the things happened he just become more and more trash. He was aware the fact his friend is having *** behind his back making fool of him. I like the idea that the mc didn't care but what did he do?He played with them like a fool and it really look like stupid in my opinion. I don't want to offend the author of this story but It's been a while since I became frustated at the stupidity of a person.He can just avoid talking with that so called friends of him especially Jet, this kid is not a friend at all. He was just acting and making fun of the mc behind the back and thinking how superior he is by doing malicious things with the girls that close to him. Ps: I'm not starting argument I'm just stating what I feel about the story so far so please go easy on me and don't take it as an personal insult. Everyone has the right to do what they want to do , right what they want and I really respect the efforts of the authors sharing their thoughts and imagination

Very Good beginning and love the story so far.Very Good beginning and love the story so far.Very Good beginning and love the story so far.Very Good beginning and love the story so far.Very Good beginning and love the story so far.Very Good beginning and love the story so far.Very Good beginning and love the story so far.

Its a good read, but one thing keeps bugging me. The fact that he decided to go to the mortal world while with his insane awakened talent could have received the grooming of a top tier family of the higher worlds. Its the same as being born rich and then saying you want to become poor. He could have gotten the top tier resources of the higher world for free (because of his bloodline talent) but what does he do? Goes to the mortal world to fight for the scraps and bits of stuff that doesnt even hold a fraction of the value of the stuff he could have gotten from his family in the higher world. The author might have done it for the world building but there are other ways to do it. He could have received the resources of his family, but when he was on a journey, he was suprise attacked and fell to the mortal world involuntarily. He is forsaking top tier resources voluntarily. Although the going to the mortal world was a good move for world background, I must say that doing it voluntarily just makes the MC looks stupid. If he fell involuntarily, it would have been good and fine, but he fricking went there voluntarily. Even if he wants to go temper himself somewhere, he can do that anywhere else. He could challenge the geniuses of other famillies to temper himself or go on dangerous beast hunting journeys. Other than this irritating action, I would say the story is good.

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Nonsensical "realistic" crafting where one guy can make few guns and cannons in few days without any experience. Good idea for a story, terrible execution.