Overall it is readable, sadly there are many inconsistencies. Like it was established that Xuan(The MC) wasn't actually that much stronger than the second ranked player and rather always one because he fought with his brain and had ample preparations, yet somehow he completely trusts in a new technique and has no backup plan almost getting himself killed by someone with a fraction of his experience. Then there is the fact that such an experienced, smart individual despite knowing the location of a certain item ahead of time never found it in his previous account purely because it didn't have an aura, despite already knowing about upgradeable artifacts as his main weapon was one, he had zero reason not to have it yet he somehow didn't. I get it would be inconvenient to lose this artifact with the reset but it conflicts with his character. There are indeed more cases but you should get my point, to advance the plot the author made the MC inconsistent with his background setting which shows a lack of planning.
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A book that might be a bit wonky sometimes, but I will try my level best to improve as it goes on. Hopefully, I will be able to give you something that is worth reading by the end of it.
The grammar was extremely good, have a decent and unique storyline, and the story was well explained so guys you could try this book, it might suit your taste
I loved Mike's selfreflections and internal comments. There were lots of places I loughed out loud. In a way he reminds me of Dexter (another character I like so much) Overal I've really enjoyed this story. Thank you.
To start, I've seen so many people complaining about the slow pacing of the novel. Please understand that it is a SCHOOL SETTING, you should be expecting relatively slow pacing. How many novels with school settings have fast pacing? Generally not very many. When you see that it's a school setting, this pacing is what you are signing up for.On another note, the novel has decent to good character development and world building due to the "filler" chapters (if you think that these chapters are filler then I'm sorry that your IQ is in the double digits). Whilst it isn't the best novel, its refreshing to see a novel that places emphasis on characters and its world rather than meaningless action. If anything, the action based chapters are the worst part of the novel as they do nothing to advance the story or develop the characters/world and are clearly the most filler-like parts of the novel.
Really a good story, it's a mix between the path Dao and the ancient Chinese tradition. Although it's a bit slow its development you a quiere a taste when reading it.
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