If he's not wrong, the spirit stones mentioned should be the thingy that contains the so called spiritual energy. As for the appraiser's eye, it was even more simple to understand. He just needed to scan anything in his surroundings and information about it would be sent to his brain.
Calrod's miners went from earning 1200 to 2200 credits a month (not counting supreme-tier stones) to earning 800 to 1600 hundred credits. It was a big blow for the miners.
It's a really good novel, if anything should be said about it is, It's really well written, has a good, and more importantly, continous development. it doesn't falter, and stuff happens and gets done. however, as there are few chapters where characters interact with each other, there is a lack of knowledge we as readers have about them. but it will solve itself in the next few chapters, I believe. the same goes with the world background, although you can tell it's almost the same world as where we live. In the beginning, there is some stuff hinting that this world has a supernatural/magical/fantastical side to it, but it just hasn't appeared yet. this makes the novel lack its own unique approach. although it isn't bad to (sometimes) not have a unique approach, I feel that this novel could benefit very much from it.maybe make it so that some specific people can use magic, and there are the typical magical races, but they are hidden in the Amazon Jungle, or they are in a deep slumber waiting for the so called "awakening of spiritual energy". there are many more things that can be done.author, you can freely use my ideas if you want, I can also give you more if you need/want. just comment under any of my comments or even under this review. you can also contact me in Discord @NaruSenku. I'm always willing give a helping hand to authors.
Alright, as the writer and not to sound biased but I sincerely urge you to give this book a read. I sense a lot of potential in it (well, why won't I after spending weeks of research lol) If you are a fan of demon, ghost and supernatural hunting as well as action, system, thriller and adventure, then you are at the right place. Although this might not be the Best book on the platform, I hope it's worth your click!!
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