Re: The Dark Lord’s Ascension

I can't give the best review since there are only a few chapters, but so far, I love this story. I saw a few grammatical mistakes so that's good. I like the characters however I hope they can be a bit more fleshed out through the story. I can't say much about the world background since it's not fully explained. However, this is a great story and I can't wait for more!

Loved reading it will be waiting for the 2nd Chapter keenly …superbly written  very well expressed, suspense on each line of the story overall a beautifully thought story

" Oh shit, Oh shit, Oh shit, Oh shit, Oh shit! "

Although the English teacher did not have any real weapon, when she hits your forehead because you misbehave or forgot to complete her homework, it can really sting and make you red for a least 3 days. As for the P.E. teacher, unlike the English and Japanese teacher, who only had a fearsome reputation among the upperclassmen, children in every grade fears him. It doesn't matter who you are, the minute you enter the school and meet this teacher, you will automatically fear him, because this teacher carries around a meter stick and will hit you, either on your hands or your bottom, the minute he sees you misbehaving.

Baldroy: There was a lot of meat to be cooked for dinner, and it was gonna take a long time, so uh, I used me flamethrower.

From a certain viewpoint, that sort of thinking is not wrong. Because I have been digging traps here.

I have lost track of how many sunrises and sunsets I have seen as I rise, ready to repeat the cycle again. i walk well into the later part of the day, until I see the port Hades spoke of. How would I gain passage with so little money? I ponder silently, wiping the sweat from my brow. Lost in thought, I don't hear the footsteps emanating from behind me.

In faraway land with icy sky and snowy ground accompanied by biting cold wind.As heavy snow swirls in the air. In a chamber with a majestic throne with a women sitting on it, having light blue eye like a sapphire with sliver hair that shined in the night.Her beauty was enough to cause a downfall of a nation but she possessed a cold aura.She face the direction of light pillar"Another troublesome thing has been born in this world."