Pregnant At Sixteen

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Wasnt expecting much as im not a huge baseball fan but this story quickly grew on me with great characters and character development. Probably the best novel on the whole site. Keep up the great work.

This book is an amalgamation of many popular books, for example the strange one is from another book called my backyard is the dumpyard of another dimension. the fishing pond is also one, the closet little people and the tree. But the most blatant of all is the shadow training

As this is an older completed novel there isn’t much point to this but wanted to leave thoughts as I had great hopes for this but dropped it at around chapter 40. There is just no consistency in the characters motives, emotions or outlook on life. It is a hot mess where he goes from being a bloodthirsty psychopath to acting like a kid, to acting his true age. He has apparently trained in his prior life but it feels retconned as he never thought of this while growing up. Really the final straw that made me drop was I can’t read yet another story about someone who is a complete trash of a human being that treats people and lives like dirt, yet somehow everyone respects and listens to. This guy is in the body of a 10 year old yet everyone follows him? It doesn’t even fit the lore or the world as his friends are high placed and have known him for years. I know this is old now and hopefully authors works have improved in the future. Being an early novel it is easy to fall into the trap of having zero emotional EQ and just brute forcing the story but it makes for boring reading that quickly grew old.

I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences.The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up! Hope you get better!

just another cliche crap novel don't bother reading it it will just kill your brain cells     .............................................

This story is fun to read. The interactions between the characters are also interesting. However, perhaps what should be improved is the writing. Sometimes paragraphs end awkwardly. I also feel the variety of words is limited. But, it's still a good read.

nothings new but i like it, sometimes cliche can be good too//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////