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umm... its really good.What I liked about the novel most is that it has a good amount of detailing in it, the detailing of characters, their surroundings, and what they are doing is really good.So far, it's a good novel and let's see what else is in the store.And yeah, the story is good, though it feels a little slow-paced, but hey its just starting, so can't complain.

I've read the whole 40 chapters of this thing, and hoo boy is it bad. And boring. (TLDR at the end) First of all, if you're expecting some excitement, action, romance, anything of the sort, it's NOT HERE. This is strictly a slice-of-life. I have no idea how this author manages to dodge every other genre except for, Idk, wish fullfilment?? Which is also interesting since the wish fulfillment part is not really all that satisfying. Story goes like this: MC gets money. Buys something. Steals from other guy. Buys something, etc, etc. Also, there's the occasional hook thrown here and there, only to be beaten up and abandoned in an alleyway somewhere. Why set up all these plot lines if you're just gonna throw them away? Every single character is one-dimensional. All the girls are caricatures. Beautiful caricatures, mind you. Plus, I don't get why the author feels the need to add all these beautiful figurines, then proceed to shy away from making the novel a harem. How, you ask? Simply by forgetting about the characters you spend 4-5 chapters reading about. I mean, aside from MC and his family, everyone's in danger of being abandoned. The system in this novel (yes, there's a system) is probably the most arbitrary, convenient piece of shit system I have ever read since Ultimate Scheming System (at least this novel fully embraces its trashiness and proceeds to be entertaining). If I had only one thing to say about the novel, it would be "waste". Everything feels like a waste. Waste of words, of characters, of a premise. Of time. And that's the largest crime a webnovel can commit. Making the reader feel like it's a giant waste of time. TLDR: Cluster**** of ideas author doesn't follow through with. Leave and don't look back.

Author is racist prick where chinese are supreme and other races are inferior. Every fucking time enemy is Japanese. Freaking corrupted chinese government!

Another trash sign in system novel with copy paste plot.I'm tired of read these half a** novels.Give us something interesting and somewhat new in a sense.

The previous novels of Ero-Saint, like Hentai System 🔝🔝🔝 and Sex Stories 🔝🔝🔝, where great masterpieces of hentai art on WebNovel, and so I was expecting much of this story. Although there is only one chapter of Perverted Evil Cultivator now, I already read 12 chapters on Patre0n, and so far, I was really excited by the beggining of the story. Especially I was very happy by the fact that the mc is evil and unrestrained by any conventions 💪🏻My favourtie type. So, 5 stars for mc design and the girls 😈Looking forward for new chapters, and hope it will be hot 🔥🔥🔥, like with Felix kun.So keep doing great job, Ero-Saint sama 👍🏻

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Well, huhhh...this is my honest opinion for you author.While reading your plot from chapter 1 till 58 (so far), sometimes I wonder if you forgot that the MC is but a background character. If you want to make the MC as the "second protagonist" please make a step by step growth. I mean, many cases in the story just feels to forced by inserting the MC in order to highlight his existence.

Except for the author's updating schedule , everything about this book is perfect. Kahala is such a sweet heart and so is Avyanna but from the looks of it seems that the book is soon to end , I wish it had se vetal more chapter or had an angle on Anas and Kahalata like one of the chapter but all is upyog the author. All I can say is that this book is awesome. Keep cheating such beautiful world .GANBATTE!!