Don't worry author man humans make mistakes including the fact that you are not even that old enough to know that the OPmc who can only get cucked by his girlfriend and cucked again later
Author: I came here just to explain few things, first of all english is not my first or second it's the fourth language, and the only perfect sentence which my teacher praised was in eighth grade, later I never got any good marks, sigh. But I want to share the world and idea which seemed to be shared on the death stake, lol. Second thing is that this story has well thought out chapter numbers and drafts, I wrote the Arch's number in the notebook too and how many chapters will be in total are already decided.Last but not least, do express your words about the story, will answer whoever has rational question, xD
So far the greatest thing about this novel is... Honesty.. On what the author wants to see and the theme of the novel.I mean. There is no diluting .. No like waste of time.It's still what some may call cringe worthy but i don't care.It's like a drawing of something good but.. i I mean the "technique" still has a lot space to develop.Emm. Man don't worry about critiques.. the way to grow as a writer is to basically; actually write what you want to see. But author. Keep it up. If this is not the last thing you write. And your keep your words honest. You gonna improve. A lot. In the best.
This story is really good and each new chapter I read makes me look forward to the next one, moreover rate of publication is high while giving quality chapters. Thank you for sharing your history with us.
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