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I dropped it but re read, and its interesting- ' life-of-an-emperor-in-the-xianxia-world ', seeing as that was the title I expected someshit like that, you know emperor MC, something different from the young master cliché. And it is, but it isnt exactly that.The MC is an emperor, that shit is new. so nice. not cliché . but he isnt the focus. Like almost 60% of the story till C35 is about his children, the semi antagonist and then MC. he isnt the main focus. plus I expected, reading the title, someshit like MC being an emperor, his past, his rise, him ruling shit like that. but it isnt there. Would be nice if its there in the future as flash back or someshit.The author does describe the WB and the Power system well, its cool.Something which I didnt like was how the antagonist just kept reviving for plot but he dies so its fineThe bk is interesting but would be nice if MC is more focused, other than that its interesting.**: I think this should be in FF section cause most of its elements are other stories.
The junk food of web novels. ^_^Messy universe ! Horrible writing ! The main character doesn't even have a name ?! What kind of retard wrote this trash ! -_-*Turns Around * Oh wait that'd be me ! 0_0
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