Monstrification

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

So interesting story but I’m going to drop.First, the English and grammar are decent. There are issues here and there but they aren’t too distracting.Story development: this is where the quality drops. It’s an interesting concept but the logic behind actions do not line up 5 times out of 10. This means that of the 10 actions the mc makes, 5 of said actions are complete forced plot or made up reasoning. I’ll continue this with the character design cause they mix.Character design: ok until the characters show skills they have no right to be able to show. The mc is a supposed city kid with no survival skills. Then he is somehow able to tell different breeds of wolves apart from each other. Then he is able to skin and butcher animals. He literally goes from no survival skills to all the survival skills. This is further exacerbated due to him having no tools/knives to help with his actions. The author obviously doesn’t understand that skinning an animal can’t just be done with your hands. I need at least a sharp knife.World background: ok but ties into the other evaluation. The mc makes constant assumptions that have no actual logical backing to describe his situation. Then the author doesn’t describe some things until they are relevant to the story at hand. This leads to even more unreasonable assumptions and actions that have no tells to why the mc actually did it or what is actually happening.

Es muy bien la historia el desarrollo del personaje principal rick con su aceptación de su deseo sexual, sus personajes secundario como Verónica están bien expresados sus motivaciones en la trama y por último pero no menos importante la escenas de ***o están increíbles más de 1 ves lo releiInglés It is very well the story the development of the main character rick with his acceptance of his sexual desire, his secondary characters like Veronica are well expressed their motivations in the plot and last but not least the *** scenes are amazing more than 1 see it reread

Spamming my daily powerstone for this masterpiece

I love this story. I like the overall plot of this story. There a minor mistakes but overall it is a great story. I would recommend this story to all my friends. As an author I know it can be hard to write because not everything you read will be positive, but I encourage this author to continue writing because they have made a wonderful story. I can't tell each and everyone of you how much I love this story. Your doing a great job author, keep up the good work. Signed Ann.