Mage of Creation

Want more, Jenny and Austin's moment. I am loving the story.

I really loved the story and got hooked to this one.... until I read the last chapter... i was looking forward to his tournaments and how all the four kings came to be know as true kings as stated by author. was this tournament the point in story where they got their names recognized ??? other characters of secret geniuses and the whole story about the craziest man alive will he be of any help to ichiro or not .... i guess these are all unanswered questions i am left with. I hope to see the 2nd volume soon, and hopefully you find the motivation to write it. also greatly anticipated ichiro vs arkenthym.

The fact that it is under paywall shows the intergrity of the ones who work on it. I followed this for a long time and i can say that its a petty thing to do, cant even watch an ad for unlocking new chapters.

Honestly, probably my favorite book right now. The grammar and translation isn’t perfect but i can read it. I’m 411 chapters in and it updates 2-3 ch per day, and usually by the end of them im pumped up in anticipation for what comes next. Would recommend

I love the world that's been developing, and all the characters involved. in terms of close plot think of Mulan. my only problem at this point 32 chapters in is the MC has no agency, she has no reason to be doing what she's doing aside from plot demands it. that being said her struggle is real, she has no easy button aside from the fact that she's fast.

This novel keeps my mind thinking. a good start up i must say. it's a book i can keep reading over a million time.A work well written, more ideas to the writer. keep doing what you know how to do best.

Wow, that's really amazing.  It's the first time I've really come across this kind of farming novel.  The novel about cultivation relates to the law that knowledge is power. Also the hero reminds me of Leylin's character from the novel Magus The Wizard's World, a hero eager to know.  My only wish or advice if this is true is to make the viewer see the progress of the hero step by step, do not jump at the time, I know that this is difficult, but try as much as you can, because this way you will succeed in attracting the audience also. Try to make the cultivation system deep in the sense that there are many requirements for progress  In cultivation, strict conditions and provisions do not make progress just absorbing qi, and the last thing that I hope to focus on is to make between one level and another great difference as big as heaven and earth, like even if they turn 1000 cultivators collecting qi fighting someone at the level of the institution, he will defeat them without  Any fatigue or injury will make the narration strict rules. The viewer will also be excited when the hero reaches a new great level because the viewer will really feel that there is a difference between the levels.  Also try to make farmers rare, mysterious and revered things that have their own rules. Give each level a right of respect, such as the level of the foundation institution. Make in Taif the number of people who reached this level approximately 100 people. This will give the viewer really the difficulty of farming, and every time the hero rises a new level was  People like him are less. In short, give each level its status. Do not make everything fodder for the defender. If you want advice, do not care about it. Did you not like it, which is to add something like a chip from the novels of Magus, the Wizard's World, and similar novels that will be really interesting? Imagine with me "The farmer who seeks knowledge in a world  "Mysterious and Dark Cultivation" and that's all I have. I hope it helped you. You are free to reject all my advice. Thank you for your time.

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