Lustful Depravity: The Villain system!

So i have started this story, and i am not sure if i am willing to put in time to read it.Mainly pointing towards the use of grammar and messy paragraphs all along since the get go.All i can see tho from the reviews, it's super overrated, grammar is leaning towards machine translations, even if it is not. just to put a perspective on it.Main character is quite a fresh thing, not what is usual for mc's to build on, i like the start of the story but. it's a major turn of with the grammar and how quick paced it is. No offence to author.

My time has come...*Clears throat*1. 2. 3. Music!I wanna be the very bestLike no one ever wasTo catch them is my real testTo train them is my causeI will travel across the landSearching far and wideEach Monster Pet to understandThe power that's inside!Monster Pets!Gotta catch 'em all!You'll fight for meIt will be your destinyMonster Pets!Oh, you're my good petIn a world I must dictate!Monster Pets!Gotta catch 'em all!A heart so trueYour courage will pull us through!You beat them and I beat youMonster Pets!Gotta catch 'em all!Gotta catch 'em all!Oh yeah...Every challenge along the wayWith courage you will faceYou will battle every dayTo claim my rightful place!Come with me, the time is rightThere's no better teamOn and on we'll win the fightIt's always been my dreamMonster Pets!Gotta catch 'em all!You'll fight for meIt will be your destinyMonster Pets!Oh, you're my good petIn a world I must dictate!Monster Pets!Gotta catch 'em all!A heart so trueYour courage will pull us through!You beat them and I beat youMonster Pets!Gotta Catch 'em all!Gotta Catch 'em all!Gotta Catch 'em all!Gotta Catch 'em all!Gotta Catch 'em all!Yeah!Monster Pets!Gotta catch 'em all!You'll fight for meIt will be your destinyMonster Pets!Oh, you're my best petIn a world I must dictate!Monster Pets!Gotta catch 'em all!A heart so trueYour courage will pull us through!You beat them and I beat youMonster Pets!Gotta catch 'em all!Gotta catch 'em all!Monster Pets!

there's not much depth in pretty much all of the story. everything happens so quickly with minimal dialog or even the main characters thoughts. one second he is fighting in class and one sentence later without any explanation or expanding on what happened or other people's thoughts the class is just over. I can understand time skipping over his first fifteen years even if I felt that his parents weren't really explained at all or his thoughts on the situation cuz it can be explained later but to the whole time he is in the academy the story just feels rushed. it's like "he arrives at school. he meets a friend. he arrives in class." obviously it's not that ridiculous but that's what it feels like.

Thanks for reviews and supports as this story got award the third place  @ WPC 142                                                                                                                    

first of MC is idiot not only naive also idiot, he says he can't further his cultivation but doesn't use the pills left behind by his father and mother even though trillion of lives are on the line because what pride?? that's shitty so many USELESS info dumps oh so so so many of them

I am unbelievably sad that i didn’t see that it had only 49 chapters so far, if i had know i would have waited for it to finish so i dont have to sait to read it! This book is amazing and I hope it can get more chapters soon!

US - www.amazon.com/dp/B07LFHYRQ5

But goosebumps starts to grow all over me. I'm sweating like a river.