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I didn't read that far because I can't get over this names. I guess it's alright if you are not German but unfortunately I am. This names are a jumbled mess of German words, just a few examples of the first three chapters:Kraftvoll = powerfullHund von Schwert = Dog of/from Sword (the heck xD)Rosa Fraulein Wunderschonen = Pink/Rose Miss BeautifulEven though the the story might be great I can't continue, my apologies.
This story feels generic, and the story so far is cliche. However, cliche isn't necessarily bad. So far, the plot reads like most fantasy isekai. Same tropes that can be found in stories like this. The main characters and world are nothing to write home about, but I'm sure with enough time they will develop. However, I appreciate the fact that its LitRPG element isn't too prevalent like many other stories and their "systems". Those can be jarring for the readers, reading numbers upon numbers between paragraphs. The pacing is decent thay it is not too slow nor too fast; just right for this kind of story. There are many minor grammar mistakes, such as lack of periods in some sentences and some non-noun words that are capitalized. I dislike the use of omatopoeias in between paragraphs, but it is my personal preference more than anything. Word choice and descriptions leads to be desired. I also applaud the story's constant and stable updates, which keeps the story alive. However, with enough time, I think this story will improve.
<p>If it were not for Nian Xiaomu, Young Master Han would not have wanted to fire her at all costs. As a result, she would not have taken this risk.</p>
Her two maids were told to retire to their smaller quarters across the way a bit earlier than usual. One of them couldn't stop blushing when they saw her, and the other had this weird goofy expression on their cute face, which they tried hiding for some reason.
His relationship with Dayat was close enough, his boss often took him to his house because of his good relationship with Mr. Bambang. Li Yangcheng was friendly to him.
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