This is not a bad story; I find it creative. However, the writing and language could be better, possibly because the author had difficulty writing in English. But overall, it’s not bad at all.

❤️u200d🔥❤️u200d🔥💗💓💯💗💓❤️u200d🔥I love 😘 the world building  ! the story 😍

I’m sure this will a great book from you.And hope it doesn’t get dropped like the past one.Excited to see what’s coming and good luck👍

Looking forward to reading more chapters.

Interesting beginning, I smell something different... a piece of masterpiece

The first chapter of Echoes of the End immediately pulled me in with its haunting atmosphere and vivid descriptions of Blackthorn. Eleanor's curiosity and her uneasy dynamic with Lena felt real, making me connect with their struggles and fears. The Obelisk’s eerie presence was unsettling in the best way, and the closing scene with the shadowy figure sent chills down my spine. I love how the mystery of their mother ties into the larger story—it’s personal and intriguing. This chapter hooked me with its suspense, and I can’t wait to see where the story goes!

firston a serious note, the writing style is good, and the plot so far is interesting, but there's almost no chapters so i can't really judge... 5 stars coz i liked it.

Very good like really good 😊😊 Author continue

based on what i read i don't believe that English is your second language its well written i can feel what the characters feel understand what the go through the author made a very unique and understandable characters i give this novel 9.7/10 its so good if any one want to read a good novel i highly recommend.

this book is really good, i hope you don't dropped it and keep continuing it on regular update🔥🔥

Not too shabby if I still say so myself🤗

I love this book! I can tell the anuther has put a lot of time into it with all the details. If you haven’t given this book a chance I Would highly recommend reading it!