It looks like the author has great direction and drive for this story. POV switches are well on-point with each perspective not being wasted on characters and that the story progresses well under a well written world. Not to mention that the writing quality is highly commendable, I can see this novel going up in a few months time. Keep it up author!
One of the best novels i read on this app if im being honest easily in the top 10. I enjoy everything about it including the fight scenes and the world building and each chapter got me wanting more I highly recommend it. It would be better if he updated more frequently but the chapters are of good length and have a nice writing style.
hey author u are good at writing and I hope u continue. I'm very interested in where you will end up. I haven't read much yet though so I cant give u constructive criticism to help u. plus people who is straight up toxic in there criticism are not worth following it because a lot of the time they didn't even read it and because of ur bio here is a lot of love (hugs u tightly and kisses ur cheek with lots of cuddles)
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