the translation is meh.. and the progress pf the story is sluggish.its remind me of the grabekeeper from the gisa pyramide but as a really cheap rip-off
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I read many stories but this one is something different and has suspense in every chapter. just update soon I can't control the excitement for next chapter
Author-san here to give his novel a review, hn.The story is just as the name says, about a human that became a God, the protagonist didn't really believe in Gods but in the end, became one, which is an irony, there's some comedy but not much, it's a world of cultivation and the strong reigns supreme, however, the protagonist had a quite naive idea that he didn't have to get strong faster but it changed after a certain thing happened, I won't say anymore but I hope that with this review, you'll get to understand more of the story, read it and possibly like it.Writing Quality: I won't say it is bad but I won't say it is the best too, there are some small mistakes here and there but only a few of them really affect the reading experience.Stability of Updates: On the start, it was extremely bad and some days, there weren't any chapters, however, now the author (which is me), is posting every day and there are chapters stocked, five of them for now, I will att this when it increases on the comment.Story Development: It is fast-paced on the start, the reason being that I didn't want him to waste time on the Kingdom, however, on the arc of the Birthday Party, the pace slows down and is now on a good pace, enjoyable to read.Character Design: Not really sure of what to say there, sorry, lmao.World Background: The author (me) developed the World Background quite well, explaining some things about the world there and there, on the start, not much information about the Continent he lives at is known but as the story advanced, he got understood how it worked, for now, only three of the Seven Great Sects were introduced but it is rather complete.Enjoy the novel, cya :)
The writing, grammar wise, is fairly terrible. It’s all in passive voice, so everything sounds funny. It makes it less enjoyable to read. Honestly it seems to be on purpose to make the word coung longer. Even if English isn’t your first language, you have to actively try to sound like Yoda all the time. I think the wrong tense choice is also because of everything being in passive voice. Grammar aside, the story is wonderful thus far. Interesting magic system and world development. It’s not one size fits all, you have X tiers of power with X subtiers. It seems different enough to stick out, but not unnecessarily complicated just to be different.
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