Lost Boy

hey a few thing i would like in the story. Just know im not telling how to write your book this is just my wants.1.i don't see a need for romance I think I just doesn't fit the feel the story has.2.i like the way your writing the book it has a show don't tell kinda thing going on.

The Smiling, Proud Wanderer is a Wuxia novel by Jin Yong (Louis Cha). It was first serialized in Hong Kong in the newspaper Ming Pao from 20 April 1967 to 12 October 1969.Alternative Names:• Laughing in the Wind• State of Divinity• The Peerless Gallant Errant• The Proud and Gallant Wanderer• Xiao Ao Jiang Hu• 笑傲江湖Translators:• Lanny Lin (Chapter 1 - 21)• HHaung (Chapter 21)• Pokit (Chapter 21 onwards)• Bliss (Chapter 30 and 31)Editor:• HHaung (Chapter 21 onwards)The reason I'm putting up this novel is so I can read it for personal use. I watched the State of Divinity (1996 TV series) and loved that show. I knew there was a Novel of it but never spent the time to look for it until now. Was reading it online but the chapters very LONG and I keep loosing track of where I left off so I came here. Reading it off Webnovel is so much easier especially since it keeps track of where you left off. Unfortunately Webnovel has a 20k word / 100k character limit for each chapter so I had no choice but to chop up the chapters into parts.For those who also want to read this feel free. I am not taking someone else's work and passing them off as my own, full credit is given to the original writer, translators and editor as listed in the descriptions, plus the content of this novel is free online in multiple sources for everyone to read. So putting this up on Webnovel is just for my own convenience sake and anyone else who wishes to read this

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The story is good. I’m looking forward to it being selected. Also whoever decided to lower the chaps from 60 to 40 for trail read should eat a shoe.

Good story concept but amarteurish attempt at historical and cultural disambiguation. like I said, good story concept but more needed in plots development and suspense generation

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hmm.. I'm thinking of your favorite  adobo and fried eggplant,he replied and pinch my nose.