It's good idea, as many of Webnovel's book, but story itself, and it's characters, are unsatisfying.Not to mention problems with lack of proper editing/proofreading, which is annoying because those random name and little mistakes aren't hard to fix, but are overall irritating.
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This novel is a great concept and it starts off rather strong but overtime it tries to do too many things at once.The MC is given a rather difficult and demanding Job without any experience or training and he is given no time to learn anything because the system forces him to start recruiting students. The students are interesting and have good backrounds. They are 3D and they have a unique aspect to each of them. The MC can’t actually teach them anything important becuse hes even less knowledgable then the students. He realizes this and spends a couple months learning only to come out with very little development. He didn’t train actively and he only read books. This would be ok if the mc learned anything substantial but he didn’t and then the system forced him to go out into the world as himself which inevitably leads to battle. So after all of this time he has to rely on temporary power to do basically nothing on his own. anything interesting is done by the system. That is my greatest critique the novel up until chapter 41( a few hours of reading) The system is more of the mc than the actual mc is. the system Isn’t on the side supporting the mc when they cant learn or understand something on there own, The system literally does Everything for the mc. Recruits students, forces mc to gather recourcrs, gives Mc temporary power, and forces the mc to fix an issue that it caused in the first place. It cant expect to give dark powers, why would it do that in the firsr place just to kill a group of people?, to a regular guy and expect him to use it responsibly. Maybe if the mc Didnt have to learn how to do his job, earn the credentials for his job, do his job, and also be a regular person, he couldve dealt with it ealrier if the system told him. The MC is supposed to be a headmaster but hes in control of notthing and that hasnt changed after 40 chapters.
As of now I havent read the novel because it has not reached 100 chapters yet. The main reason why I picked to read this novel is because I seen the military academy tag. I hope there will be different things in this academy like fighting tournaments, missions and mysteries.
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