Lightbringer System: Orphan to Paragon

While the story itself is really enjoyable there are some things that you should know. The update stability is really bad (if you read more reviews your gonna see), there was an update chapter where author made you spent coins for just to tell you that there is real life too and the story is now on Kindle Vella...., not a nice move and the chapter after that are apparently 60 coins (i only know of the one after the update chapter since i didnt continue at that point). So if you want all that with some enjoyment (if you like this kinda story your gonna like it i guess) go on but i would say its not worth it. sadly 🫠

I've always wanted to read a pure football novel with realistic gameplay and without any stealing abilities, cheat scifi or fantasy and this just might be it only issue I have with the novel is with starting in a unknown team in an unknown league but I would say the game management is spot on as a aspiring writer I understand hwo hard it is to keep consistency while trying to attract readers which is why I would be rating it a 4.4

please continue making the rabbits life more complicated with 'random' accidents