Liam Connolly Adventures - Blood Numbers

The story had potential, but the character development is almost nil and the protagonist is dumb to an unbelievable point, seriously, read a few chapters and you will see that even Naruto is smarter

This is a good novel, the plot is solid and characters are likeable, the writing quality is good and it's easy to read,  I def recommend it, good luck and well done author!

Great so far absolutely love it👍also cover sauce? now dots... ..    ..  .. .. .. ..  .. . ... .. .. .. .. .. ....   ..  ..  .. ....    .. .. .. ..

I like the ability so far and the story has great potential. I hope you don’t drop this author and keep up the work.

I hope this novel would be picked and published soon.🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜

I'll be direct.Love the work, don't understand why it doesn't have more views, want more of these kinds of novels.So many people who are writing "reborn in a new world with a system" have ****ty grammar, nonsensical wish fulfilment storylines and stupid plot developments. I dont understand why they have 10s or 100s of times more views than this.Now, with my rant out of the way, I'll give my grade to boost the novels rating as a straight 5, and give some of my selfish opinionated thoughts. I have only read somewhat after ch70, but in my self entitled opinion, that is enough to judge.Writing quality - Hey, it's real English. Meaning there are no typos or stupid grammar or horribly translated, out of context sentences. And oh my god thank you for no repeating, overused and unimaginative descriptions like "it was like the difference between heaven and earth".Story development - Somewhat irregular, but not in a bad way. The important parts that you want to read are well detailed and narrated. The combat, the encounters, character interactions etc.The tedious things like battle aftermath or uneventful traning are sorted out in a few paragraphs.Character design - Interesting, strong(personality), and loveable characters. Or hateable depends on what floats ur boat.The speech patterns between the character are easily recognisable and consistent.World background - Didn't get much of it so far, but what I did, I liked.Introduced Countries/kingdoms/empires seem interesting and promising, and the world seems to slowly be coming alive.I still don't have any idea about the world's geography, like the amount of continents, world size or climate for that matter(other than it seems to constantly be cold. Maybe its winter idunno). But hey, neither do most Americans about earth(Ha). No offense, just stereotypeing.Overall, quite an enjoyable read and much more deserving than most of the trash on the top charts, and with better writing quality. Save a few.Hey, I said that I'd be direct, not quick.

J'adore , he is great Please update update It's too great that I salivate for the next chapter 😘😃I love the mc I wonder who is the mlStill the manner of cultivating is wow

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