Leo n‘ Kitty

Good work author, the story is different from others which makes it unique, interesting synopsis too, I'm liking the MC already, although this story is still in it early stage but I can tell it has a lot of potentials so I'm rooting for Ya, and I'm also expected of it. Keep up the good work.

The story thus far is quite developed. The writing style is engaging and pleasant to read; the hilarity of the bugs in the system make me want to keep reading more! This is the first original book that I have really enjoyed reading.

This book is insane 🤣 great story about man with his past reincarnation in his body and item creation system. His easy control losing is great and sense of humor is perfect.

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Just from the 3 initial description chapters, I can guess that you have it all planned and prepared.At least most of it!So no worries about it getting dropped right!That's what readers expect most from new original novels.It is very Interesting. I didn't find any small mistakes.Good luck!Keep going!

•Post Analysis:

"Hm, interesting," she replied.  "You probably don't even know how impressive getting 6th place is.  This academy has existed for hundreds of years, and almost everyone who ranked highly on these leaderboards went on to become a powerful figure.  Well, if they didn't die before they could accomplish that.  It's been seventy years since someone placed in the top ten on this leaderboard."

"What?" Surprised to hear that, he turned his face to her.