I resent the fate for giving me no potential in martial arts.
I resent martial world for not letting me live peacefully after I left the martial world.
I resent ordinary people for not letting me finish my work.
In this life, I don\'t want to be in your skin when you mess with me.
Follow Neo on his journey in his second life with help of AI chip and previous life memories.
# Important.
- COVER MADE BY SILENTSCARLETT! Praise the godly skills! :D
- I am not a native English speaker.
- I write to improve my English and writing. I will edit chapters multiple times.
- I am a university student and exams are coming.
- I hope you can pinpoint some logic and grammar mistakes.
Thanks for checking out this novel.
You can contact me via email:
[email protected]
Recommendation Lists
Latest Release
-
webnovel C 32
-
webnovel C 31
-
webnovel C 30
-
webnovel C 29
-
webnovel C 28
-
webnovel C 27
-
webnovel C 26
-
webnovel C 25
-
webnovel C 24
-
webnovel C 23
-
webnovel C 22
-
webnovel C 21
-
webnovel C 20
-
webnovel C 19
-
webnovel C 18
-
webnovel C 17
-
webnovel C 16
-
webnovel C 15
-
webnovel C 14
-
webnovel C 13
-
webnovel C 12
-
webnovel C 11
-
webnovel C 10
-
webnovel C 9


Hello! Everyone I am the author of this novel. It's second try to write this novel. I want to share my imagination and practice my writing and English.
The writing quality is probably low for now but it will be improved with time and effort. I hope you can help me with pinpointing the grammar, spelling and logic errors to make this story better. I am using Grammarly but it's basic version and it only shows the basic errors.
Thank you for your attention! I hope, all of us will gain something from this story. :)
Settling that aside, as other had pointed out, there are grammatical errors, incorrect uses of punctuation marks and chopped sentences. I'd suggest getting an editor to help you with this issue and you could focus more on fleshing out your main plot.
As for the editing, make things easy on yourself and partner with a volunteer or hired editor. Even professional writers use another set of eyes to catch their errors and make constructive suggestions for the flow of the story.
This is an excellent work. Please continue developing the story, characters and plot. And, don’t forget to come back with new chapters!
Characters are great, despite the jittery quality of writing you can tell the characters have at least more depth than the skin.
World background? Gradual introduction...?
Eh, but at least it's somewhat believable, despite the fact that having languages from different worlds be so similar is slightly too unlikely. Unless we are dealing with multiverse type of transmigration/reincarnation.
Overall, 4/5 stars. Obviously, English can be improved, but no one is perfect.
Leave a Review
Part 1. Rate (click Star to vote)
Part 2. Login to account
Part 3. Write your review
Directory of Novels. where you can find Novels
Copyright novel cool © 2018–2024 — All rights reserved