Land Of Fog (re write)

I don’t get it

Need more updates, but otherwise, love the book so far

Another non Chinese author trying to write a Chinese book with nothing new except the system and doesn't realize a lot of people have gotten tired of the regular Chinese cliche.

During the first 40 chapters I was very frustrated reading this novel because it was almost the exact carbon copy of Desolate era. I like desolate era but I did not want to read something exact similar to it. But I managed to endure and believe me I was glad that I did not drop this novel because it was fricking great. I all recommend all of you to stick to it until the end.Dear author you did a great job there but I think you should change your writing style a bit since you write a lot of chapters about some things which were not necessary like you spend 5 chapter just explaining the abilities of eye of myriad dao which could have been done in just about 2.5 chapters. So what I want to say is that you focus a lot on unnessary chapters. Anyway keep up the good work.

I've got one word for this novel. WOW.seriously, how hasn't this novel topped the charts yet? I personally love the book,and think it's a masterpiece.I wouldn't be surprised if it tops all the original novels on this site. The one thing that would suck is that if it goes on hiatus (no more chapters) I would be really sad because this story rocks

As someone who's read the novel on wattpad  and loving the story development of what i read so far. I hope  you upload the rest of the chapters On webnovel.**: Can't wait for more chapter's for this awesome novel.PSS: Are you also going to upload Lost Fantasy? on WebNovel

Honestly the number of things wrong with this story outnumber the mountains in Bhutan. The most important problem would be the lack of creativity. By reading just the first 10 chapters you can see this is like any other lord survival game which is released or featured bi-weekly. There has been no improved plot or any innovative or new aspects introduced to this type of book they constantly release.

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