The story is going good and the author is focusing on every character and giving backstories and power explanations that's good

make mc absolutely insanely handsome by awakening somthing inside him and it will make more impact on his villain side when he goes to any place female leads will have attraction towards mc so those son of heaven will have jealousy towards mc. and it will make story more believable or it won't after all female leads  won't get attracted to just good looking guy after all they are always played by fate

• Name: Lady Aether (Real Name: Aether Noctis)• Alias: The Silver Tempest, The Wandering Exorcist, Hand of the Divine• Age: 16• Affiliation: Demon Hunter Association (Exam Candidate)• Abilities: Hand-Sign Based Exorcism, Divine Sigil Combat, Wind-Based Spiritual Techniques• Weapon: Silver Spirit Blades (Manifested from Hand Signs)• Ultimate Move: "Divine Mandala: The Celestial Sealing Circle"

This is really a solid novel and a very unique interpretation of a System as a whole. The novel doesn't have some sort of linear Level Ups at all, its straight up copy of danmachi leveling without the statestics part. So Mc needs to do feats to grow and unlock more of his DLC powers. Mc is a child so expect slow progression with romance and harem, while you can clearly see who will be harem members with the way mc and his interaction with others are portrayed in the chapters.The scope of the verse and power level is ludacrisly high without using excessive power scaling jargon names you often find in other power fantasy novels. This is not that type of novel. The scope of the verse itself seems very secondary as mc's main motive is just to become a harem protagonist, thats all.

So far I'm absolutely loving this novel. It can feel a bit rushed in the first couple chapters but evens out a lot more later on. I can't wait for more and I really hope this doesn't end up in the long list of great novels that end up dropped

Love the story please don't drop. Always look forward  next chapters

I absolutely love this book and I hope for more chapters to read, the characters are great and have depth, the story is new and the world background is great as well.

i read all free chapters and i must say this is actually really well written you weren't kidding when you said this was a better writtenso overall story seems to be pretty goodname might sound cliche but the story is pretty unique

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This first chapter is intense! 🔥 Captain Dorian Kael is such a badass, fighting those creepy infected things. The author did an amazing job describing the scene, it felt like I was right there with them! So many edge-of-my-seat moments, especially when they reached the lab. Is anyone else hooked in this novel like me?

the starting was good then i saw twist in the story in first chapter itself and was something else, people who are reading this review just complete the first chapter 🤣🤣

I have read a lot of reincarnation books so i was a bit apprehensive but the synopsis is good and the storyline is great. Chapter one has a bit of grammatical errors but the author improved that in chapter two so its definitely worth the read. P.S I am in love with muffet.