It was good until the government happened. Once they found out about his powers, they gave him two options: to keep quiet about the supernatural things in the world, or to help them in fighting against the supernatural. That's fine.Then, the MC tells them that he will take the first option. The government is fine with that. Great! But then the government basically forces him to do the same work anyways, but for pennies. They gave him 300 yuan, or something around that ballpark, for being forced to participate in a large battle. They continuously call him to "help the nation". Its honestly wasted potential
It's an interesting concept and I would like to see a novel like this, but the way it's written is terrible. I hate the loose plot progression and the way the characters interact with the MC. In short, this is something you only read if you're not looking at anything other than the MC getting women to sleep with him and showing off while not leaving his house unless it's to save someone. It's honestly hurting my intelligence even though I'm only 19 chapters in. Just some examples of what makes my brain hurt reading this. The MC starts dating his neighbor, who he rarely talked to on the day he got the system. She literally has no reason for liking him, other than his looks. She even acknowledged that he didn't go out much at all other than to go to work and rarely interacted with others.He also sleeps with the reporter he literally just meets just because he's handsome despite just getting a girlfriend 2 days ago.He also used magic like it's normal in front of people, and even decided to advertise it without thinking of the trouble it's going to cause him. All because he thought more people are going to ask him to leave his house so he can refuse them to get more points for the system's store.It's just really dumb to me how he isn't keeping a low profile at this stage in the novel, and I understand it's to progress the plot but it's so sloppy in my opinion.
Good stuff..if you can't stay hooked up,what is the point in reading..It is basically that kind which you will find interesting,if you r a wuxia reader...pretty good set up so far..
It would be optimistic to say but can feel the raging and boiling blood of Evan waiting forward for more chapters especially slaughter of god's(pretty out of the box) Rated 5stars for the hype I'm first chapter
A very good novel. I just hope that the MC won't start a harem and will become more protective of his friend and fiance. Please don't make him a idiot that let's his enemy's live even after they cross the line.Keep it up I will surtenly support this novel in the future.
I am of course going to rate the book of my friends book high but not perfect. They have a lot to improve on and would like to hear feedback that is not just criticism but constructive criticism and advice.
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