Love the story so far. Such a unique twist for the plot. looking forward to more chapters.

Yes I’m giving my own novel 5 stars…you wouldn’t give your child 4/5 now would you!🥸😂

lets's see what happens in future , ❤️❤️

I really like the world, the depth of the characters, and, overall, the writing style—it all comes together beautifully! 💕

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I love the world building 😍🏫, description, writing style !

The characters, names, world-building and especially the way author revealed the current characters are just awesome! I have seen their avatars as well and it's fucking neat and cool! This book is a must read!!

Interesting and brings a fresh, innovative concept. The idea of the author being transported into their own novel and becoming the villain instead of the hero is unique and exciting, Lucifer!!! appears to be complex and well-developed. His internal struggle between wanting to be a hero and his reality as a villain adds depth to his character and makes the reader empathize with him.It’s clear that the story moves at a very fast pace, especially in chapters 1-3. But overall, this novel is truly enjoyable!

Beautifully written! The author has a way with words which helps the readers visualize the action as it happens. It also combines comedy which gives the story a lighthearted feel. The world building is nicely put together, and the characters are fun. Yun Jieshi’s internal thoughts always sends me🤭Would definitely recommend!

So far the synopsis and first two chapters are okay. Character development too. Also the narrative technique Is lit...would love to read more

This book is on point. Ive not given up on this book because it is straight forward. Nothing is made hidden and whatever that is hidden is conveyed through mystery. I love this work

This novel keeps getting better and better every chapter, only thing is, we dont really have that many chapters to read yet :(. but this is peak.