ICE GLACIER:THE RETURN OF THE ICE DRAGON

<p>"Bukan dia yang ku maksud, tadi aku melihat mu bersama seorang pria"</p>

"Nanti saja deh aku tanya" gumam Xan Xan, disela sela ia sedang menulis.

Hiii DaoistMpCOY7, I just came across  The Pawnshop of Cursed Objects not long ago and it really caught my eye🥺!Im not a big fan of horror but i'm glad I decided to give this a try,  it's really good!  I happen to be a digital artist and If you’re ever interested in commissioning a cover or scene for your story, please feel free to reach out. I’d really loove to work with you on your characters!❤️❤️🫂

There are some gender pronoun mess ups, and sometimes author gets their characters mixed up.  The issue that caused me to stop is the Mountain pile of crap dumped on the MC within the first months of starting this journey.  I was fine with the noble family and then some dangers at the sect in the future.  But we have already wiped the nobles and have now dumped 2 World level adversaries on our fresh new MC.  He has already had to be saved by his alter all powerful ego once.. One of the big bad villains just beat his master and the family he was with.like ants..  Unfortunately piling this level of adversaries on a new MC ruins the story IMO, it sucks the joy out as MC is always one fart from being destroyed.  The other thing is the constant beating a dead horse that he needs to reach grand master root to unlock towers and system is worse than the 4 year old doing "are we there yet?"   So sad I was really enjoying this read till this.

Bro your story and everything is best and good but there are some major grammar problems in there so please i insist use deeps@ke ai or something it will really increase quality and once again your story is good i say in top 10 in currenty new novels.

I wanted to be this novels first review...so you see, I've been following this from the start even though author decided to change it.All I can say is that this sh*t is peak. you might say how do I know...well, let's call it trust and experience, so believe me and read this ( I'm not someone related to author btw😅)In the last version it had 16 chapters and so far it was great even though it was incomplete.And at last, I have a couple of things to discuss  with author from my experience related to the last version of this novel1. Please no harem. I know on this platform, the more you write about sm*t, ntr and .... , you'll get more views but it also lowers the quality of the novel and we can see it from other peak and popular novel and none of them are harem at most 2 fls, so please consider about it 2. increase the chapter length. it's too short and make readers tired .2000-3000 is good ig.3. at last update stability. although the novel has a massive potential but if you update 2 or  3 chaps a weak, the novel will eventually lose its readers I'm saying this cuz it happened to me a couple of times as a reader. 2 or 3 chaps a day is good, given the fact that it is still the beginning.All I've said was a suggestion based on my experience and in the end is the authors choice of course. so no offence and I hope you write more.