I'm a Model that's Undercover as The School's Nerd

The ending sucks.

Its good overall but it feels too slow on the long run. Ive read 1000 chaps and only 1 month went by in the novel. The world background is quite good and i liked how mc fighted the world without background but i got bored from time to time since everyday he did almost the same things and author for some reason had a fear to skip things, be it time skip, skip repeating the same rutinary actions everyday or just skip the half chapter description of rewards mc gets from hunting monsters and so on.Also, i didnt like how the romance is set in this novel. By now mc has just 1 relationship even though there are like 5 girls at least in love with him but he just ignores them. So you might think thats because he was in love since start with the 1 relationship he has, nop. He started a relationship with a princess he knew just of 2 days and didnt meet for more than 3 times and showed no mutual attraction but ignored bai yun who was with him from the 1 day and is clearly devoted to him.Other remarkable thing is the mcs attitude, read chapters 995-996 and you will know what i mean by that. He claims through out all the novel not to be a saint but acts as one when he can and also when he cant, helped by the plot. He claims his moral as the upright and when someone doesnt agree with him the first thing he did was to check his loyalty because he is too used to people licking his feets and walking a smooth path. He is willing to show mercy (in those chaps and i guess itll remain like so in the future) to the enemy when thats a privilege of the powerfull, which he isnt but is too full of himself to realize. Specially if you know some chaps before almost his army was wiped by the remanents of the kingdoms he destroyed, because he didnt left them fully clean, because they set up a trap and would succed if not the mc realized thanks to the plot and make it in time. To sum up, the story and the world background is really good but there are some things with the pace and mcs personality who are hard to endure. If you can, you should really read this novel because its def above average.

I just feel like there is no realism to the story in-terms of the man character and the worldHe just accepts that on dead he is transported, resurrected/given a new body and a system with no questions, surprise, etc.He first becomes aware in this new world in front of a dragon like giant lizard but then the lizards exist is completely ignored There just seems to be not detail or realism in the story at all.. I known it fantasy + system and all but collecting a 120 body strengthening fruits in a few hours and easily becoming level 20 with plenty to spare but a local harvester/collector is only level 2, why??I'm not saying I can do any better or trying to dishearten the author I just think  there is so much in this story where you just think how did 5 paragraphs of necessary story telling  get reduced to 2 sentences.This is the fist time I have written a negative review but it just seems like the author has a good idea but they really need to go back and re-write the story from the start and add in more details about the world and about the MC's thought processi.e why would in think he is safe after reaching level 21 given that he did it in a few hours of arriving by simply eating a few fuits. I mean has he used his appraisal like skill on some of the animals, is he just stupid and natural arrogant/delusional. I mean its the same as a normal guy going to 1 karate lesson and leaving he is now a master fighter.well if  you have read to hear in my rant good on youP.S. if you are the author and you actually bother to read this I hope you take this as the constructive criticism I tried to make it.

Amazing!! In fact if I do say so myself this Novel is better than the previous one!(Overpowering System)This doesn't mean I don't like his previous one though, i'm just saying it's better.Some may say that is sounds exactly like Beauty and the Bodyguard, but trust me it is NOT. Its may be similar but it different at the same time.Also for those who have a family Member in the Army or in some Military position, thid Novel's MC is a total Military Brat, so highly relatable!~ Over all another Amazing Story by Lynerparel!

the story is not and what I expected, I thought it would be serious, but the story doesn’t seem like that and for me this story starts to get boring in these last chapters I hope you’re lucky to have your story but I won’t follow this one history

The writing skills of the author is top notch. Without a doubt. The funny incidents and the interactions between the characters are smooth and perfect. All the best and keep up the good work!!

Really well done story the character is very unique I find as well as the story different from other system novels like how the power of the main characte has steadil increased over all really good. One down side the chapters are a little short but sines there’ a new chapter almost everyday makes up for it.

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