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PumpkinKing10
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Bloodline Novels have always been a favourite, with well-written plots and moving characters. It Makes readers travel together with the story. Give it a try.
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Here is my review abouy this book: Worldbuilding: I think the worldbuilding in this one is quite nice with the good description and the mythical creatures in there. Overall, its a nice fantasy world.Characters: The main character, Ash Born is both funny, cool, and has an eagerful.spirit too especially with him slowly learning about the power. The side characters for me is supportive and likeable such as Ash Born family and the elf King.Pacing: The pacing of this story can be fast sometimes, but I think it needa to be tone down a bit to make it smoother.Overall, its nice book and I do enjoy reqding it
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Ngl really good for your first time knowing you irl. Even doe I read up to chapter one it's actually really good pasing and good character bacground Keep it up bro 👍
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Geez imagine knowing your going to die because your the female lead must be devastating 😂but I hope she can win and find love and not die 🥲
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A suprising good Novel, so far. The MC awakened as a F Rank Lord, the lowest and weakest Rank of the Lord System, which is pretty much already seen as useless, almost lower than a unawakened Human, As F Rank lords have not more power than common Humans, but are still needed to fight. The MC in this Novel is, of course, much more, but he still doesnt stray from the F Rank landlord path, and endures insult and acts weak, as F rank Lords, and Newbie Lords, are restricted from many chances, that other higher Ranked Lords have, to get Stronger, as to not waste any Ressources (Or Maybe protect higher Ranked Lords, in my Opinion). So MC here is enduring and acting, as far as he can(While Human massen have a superficial biased opinion), to bid his Time to grow Stronger, as he will be OP, but is not at the moment.The System and the Flow of Story is also very nice, as the System isnt Omnipotent in this Novel, as it looks like that Humans can control part of it, or influence it.So far is the Novel very good, but it is also a Novel, where you cant be sure what else is going on, as many things happen, not rushed, and without 200+ Chapters it is still uncertain if it stays Good, get better, or worse.
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It’s a sin to see something this good and not compliment,It’s a sin to keep your mouth shut when they should be wide open, praises flowing out from them. I mean, how can I be guilty of such sin?This is a masterpiece. While I may have pursued this with the aim of swapping reviews and collection like most authors do, I’m also guilty of this sin, so.., but I genuinely wanted to read this book, and I am genuinely enjoying it. Cora is a mystery not only Damien, but I, want to unravel. i_am_damien by the way, see what I did there? Haha
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Zikky did it again, this book is amazing! The first 15 chapters have me so hooked, I can't wait for more chapters!
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The story has an intriguing premise? but it suffers from slow pacing and overly detailed descriptions. The characters show promise, but their development is hindered by the lack of dialogue and interaction, The world background is vague, leaving many question unanswerd. Overall, the story has potential, but it needs more refinement.
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Dear Readers,Thank you for picking up "The Path of Justice." I hope you enjoy the journey of Orzil Ceylon as he navigates the challenges of morality, choice, and the pursuit of justice in a mystical world. My aim is to blend thrilling adventures with deep reflections on what it means to truly stand for something.Your support means the world to me, and I can’t wait to hear your thoughts on Orzil’s story. Enjoy the ride, and may you find inspiration in his journey!Happy reading!
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Tales of Nashirah as it is , a unique experience , a little slow experience for dozen of chapters as it sets it prose. This Novel gives off a fresh new breath in the stalling market of Xuanhuan. Yes, there is reincarnation and a little cheat but the world building and PowerSystem is explained in such a way that it seems that won't make our mc arrogant and lazy, in short it wont be a smooth sailing for him as well. Well all that is till latest chapter and i am hopeful of this work and wish on God that this will not stray off its original Vibe.
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Hi, everyone. Well, I waited until I reached 100 chapters to have time to think about what to say in this review (And it didn't work. I still don't know what to say. But I'll try).I will use Webnovel's own system to try to give my view on what I think of this story so far (as a writer, since I don't have the perspective of a reader). So, if you have given the story a chance and disagree with something I say, feel free to share your opinion politely, please.Writing Quality: Incredible, at first I was already unsure of what to say.Well, I'm not sure, but I think it's more than evident to you that I translate the chapters, right? So, although I currently use spell checkers, where most of the errors found are character names, the word "mana" or words like Ancient written with a capital letter, maybe a lack of commas sometimes too, I can't say how my writing quality in English (in the case of the translation) would be categorized.Story Development: In my view, this started happening now. Not because it's too dragged out, so much so that it took 100 chapters for something to happen, but because the chapters before 81 didn't have an average word count, like the 2,000 I have now, and, something I noticed a while ago, I think I spent too much time and words describing things, even though it could have been done more quickly (I'm trying to reduce that now, although describing is something I enjoy doing).Dialogues are a separate issue, I think I do have a problem writing dialogues. I'm trying to improve, and I don't know if there's anything else I can say about it.I believe that the coherence and consistency, both of the characters and the world, are okay so far, as they are all under construction.As for the pacing, it falls into the same "problem" I mentioned earlier about the chapters before 81. A lot happened in them, many important things. However, at least for me, I have the feeling when rereading everything that the same things could have been written with fewer chapters.Oh, and don't get me wrong. I'm not saying that the chapters from 81 onwards don't have these same problems, just that, in my opinion, they have been reduced.Character Design: As far as I remember, it's okay too. I don't keep reinforcing the physical appearance of the characters all the time, but I believe I described enough in their first appearances. As for the personalities, except for Hye, I think few have had enough time to show theirs.Update Stability: This is indeed a problem. For example, since it's the hundredth chapter, I wanted to make it a bit longer than the others, so it ended up with 3,500 words, I think. But it should have been even longer. The problem is that after the first thousand words, it takes me a long time to write the rest. If I write a thousand words in almost 1 hour, I only reach 2,000 after at least 4 hours (A time that my phone can't stay charged...), that is if I don't have to finish the next day because I can't think of the ending (Which happened with chapter 100. I started it on Saturday and finished it only on Sunday night). I will try to write extra chapters and save them to post even when I can't finish writing the chapters, but I think that will take a while still.World Setting: I used to think this was also a problem, so much so that, if you notice, I don't describe much the environments outside the dungeons and that are actually real places, because I've never been there. But now, I will try to pay more attention to this, either through photos or other means, I will try to find ways to describe these places more accurately from now on.To conclude, I wanted to let you know that the synopsis does not refer to the protagonist, but to a character who appeared in chapters 97 and 98 (the two that, honestly, I enjoyed writing the most so far).I think that's it. If I forgot something, it's because I'm sleepy (it's 4 in the morning now, and I finished chapter 100 a little earlier). Thank you for reading this and, if you decide to give this story a chance or have already done so, thank you as well.
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Continue please. Can I request some romance scenes to you ?
Mr Bodyguard, Protect Your Heart!