I Have Four Dads After Transmigrating in a Novel

Yooo! Chapter 28 is where things get super interesting. I love the setup. How to really get Isekai 101 in the real world 😂😂😂😂 simple and effective. I should try it one day

Hari demi hari terlewati, bagiakan di neraka. Hingga akhirnya tibalah hari H atau hari pertunangan itu. Aku tidak menghadiri pertunangan ayahku selayaknya anak menghadiri pertunangan ayahku. Aku dating kepertunangan ayahku yang di adakan di hotel bintang lima dengan sangat mewahnya dan para tamu undangan yang terhormat. Aku datang hanya untuk mempermalukan ayahku, sungguh anak macam apa aku ini. Dengan maksud agar pertunangan itu batal dan penikahan tidak pernah terjadi.

Making various calculations and a deep planning, Ranata let out a big grin while he walk back to the bedroom. There is still about one hour left before the sun is completely sunken and the darkness of night fully covered their world, leaving the moon and the stars for illumination. That's plenty of time for foreplays and setting the mood.

Spitting blood from his mouth the man got up as he hatefully stared at Issei with vengeance in his eyes before he roared loudly at Issei.

A collective gasp came from everyone in the room except Kakashi who already knew about the cival war. "One of my friends, yes cyclops I had friends" he says to Kakashi who was giving him a look of disbelief "Was a user of bloodline. Their family was brutally killed and then left for any wild life to come pick at the corpses. My friend though survived due to the sacrifice of her family letting her escape. I joined up with the Resistance or rebellion or whatever they called themselves, honestly i didn't care about the name. Though I didn't join officially. I staged the first assassination attempt on the Mizukage and failed forcing me to go on the run."

The two remaining stat is a bit special. CHA or charisma improves my looks and ability to interact with other people which I have no knowledge of improving. LUK or luck, on the other hand, is self-explanatory the only way to increase this is by doing something lucky, like finding a four-leaf clover and flipping a coin.

Good enough grammar. But please give some effort to making sure the paragraphs and conversations are formatted to be readable too.The novel description said the MC was a normal human with no power and got by with wits and determination. I was hopeful that this MC would not be another overpowered idiot.But then the MC was announced as the fiance of a queen in the third chapter which... is something else, haha...And then he defeats half a dozen knights effortlessly with a dual-wielding style he has never used before, analyzed the difference between wood and aluminum with a single glance from the bleachers of the fighting arena, and then later plans and executes a rescue operation without prior experrience, based apparently just on knowledge gleaned from TV and family stories, then goes on to defeat...well, you get the idea.Author...*cries*...your definition of 'powerless' is apparently very different from mine.I'm partial to isekai where the MC's power is just modern knowledge, but give some logical reason how the MC got that knowledge please. If any person can plan a hostage retrieval just from watching TV and listening to grandpa talk about the war years, then this reviewer hopes to learn the violin from watching lindsey sterling on youtube.The plot progression of this novel is great. There is always something to be interested in as the MC introduces the wonders of bombs to a medieval world based on magic.The growing relationships of the MC have some interest as well, though I think giving the MC actual friends rather than people he steamrolls over at the soonest opportunity would heighten interest in the world.The beginning chapters are a bit rough but the format and grammar gets better as the story progresses. Lots of action, good development.All in all, a good read. Good going author!

What happened to the novel. Why it stopped updating. It was good to read now suddenly it stopped. The character and story development was pretty great.