I forfeit my powers to go on another adventure

I started this story with some expectation, but honestly I'm very disappointed. The translation quality and stability are fine for now, but the development of the story, character design and world background are basically rubbish. The way he earns his power is interesting and by reading you feel as if there really is some sense, rather than just being random; but after that the story stops being good. There are many flaws in the character's day-to-day logic. He is in a marine biology university, and although he has claimed to not be a good student before, he has the mind of someone at age 8. He is always having random lascivious thoughts with women he knows, and he does not expect them to get angry. He has the habit of speaking aloud his ridiculous thoughts without even checking if anyone is listening. He was frightened in an extremely ridiculous way when he shouted nonsense on the beach and a woman heard and was angry, further stating that it is normal to imagine that she was a ghost (consideration: this woman was 'coincidentally' a police beauty, extremely nosy in the life of others). The view of foreigners from the author's point of view is also at least questionable. It looks like it will become a Chinese ultra-nationalist novel too. Anyway, strongly recommend not to read.

This is the 69th review, how auspicious. The story is very good and must be written by a very handsome, well-adjusted person. It's about a snake, a most magnificent creature, who disguises himself as a human through magic. Being a human is confusing, of course, and the first parts of the story is about adjusting to his dumb slightly-more-human allies and trying to make them successful. Once he figures more things out, he kills people he doesn't like, and lives his best life. Hopefully, everyone lives happily ever after, from there. It tends to never work out perfectly-- probably because humans are involved.

Don’t waste your time reading this author’s books as he never completes them and drops them whenever he thinks the views have dropped. If you don’t believe me check his profile.

DAYUM. I was totally scared out of my pants when i woke up this morning and founf your work deleted. I found thisbl again thankfully and read the chapters I hadn't yet......... AND I LOVE IT.... WE HAVE AN OFFICIAL SHIP NOW 😂😂. HOPE I SEE THAT COUPLE MORE IN THE LATER CHAPTERS. PLEASE CONTINUE UPDATING. DONT STOPPPPPP

It's a nice story with consistent updates.. Keep it up author.. . Your writing skills are really nice.. . Good.. . Good.. . Good.. Good.. . Good

I really like this novel, I just wish the author had more chapters. The short teaser was really a good opener, but without the follow up I feel let down.

at first I thought I found some hidden gem in the pile of trash in webnovel...the tow first chapters were promising..a serious mc with a great cheat kinda gave me the vibes of some epic cultivation novel...yet the moment the academy arc began everything went downhill...the mc got his first friend..yep the same fatty trope everywhere...and the we start an unending series of "whoha" and some childish shit..then the female friend with a tragic past...the author was trying to build a comedic atmosphere with a touch of some heartwarming moments and he failed miserably....the academy that was supposed to be some huge behemoth was gathering with its headmistress to watch a match between tow newbies that just started a week ago...there is no depth at all and everything seems shallow...the magic was absolutely trashy..I thought I was reading some martial art  novel...the author messed and delivered a very poor power system.....I can rant nonstop about the bad things in this story..so I will say it's a story full or overused cliche...no depth...no a single thing intresting..it may suit some new readers but as someone whe read hundreds of books...this novel only belong to the trash category

I'm sorry for saying this but it's truly unfair for Lu Shen for he never want a loveless marriage.And the one he love is a selfish person who can't appreciate his love. A possessive man love is always like to control so I don't find any fault in Lu Shen. And in love,  we should try to accept the other people as he/she is..Lu Shen accept her no matter how different her appearance but the HY character is truly disappoint ..Anyway, that's my opinion. I don't mean to offend anyone..