"Just burst out with all your strength right from the start, there's no need to hold back considering the strength test is similar to our island's gravity. As for the agility test, just remember, the obstacles are slightly camouflaged," Lachlan explained.
Well , A solid starting ground , for a prologue .The kind that keeps the reader craving for more , it keeps those strides of mystery mingling.I've taken a liking into it , Keep for more , just you need to separate paragraphs into smaller ones , because it seems as if reading an article not a novel , Just for some professionalism .keep it up
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