I should be ashamed of myself for reading this trilogy so fast but... If there is a shred of decency in anyone who reads these they will understand These Were Epic!!! The fact there are printed copies so I can share with my fellow book worms is just the icing on the cake :D
The author tried to write something absolutely amazing but in trying to do so he turned this into a mediocre one. The story seems to be inconsistent and it seems like the author didn't really plan ahead(example - soul sizer points turned from 100 to 1000 just to support the authors new declaration that ouroboros wont let a lesser bloodline exist, and I think the author added this point because he might have thought that soul of light and darkness are too burdensome or redundant or overkill to have). A good world build is necessary to make a good story but overdoing it can also ruin the story. This author overdid to the extent that the story is going at a sluggish pace. Moreover worldbuild generally means describing the cities, environment conditions, their culture, art, architecture, that worlds history etc. but this story's over extensive world build (or gibberish to put it simply) is mostly focused on the unending philosophical pondering of the MC rather than the aspects I stated above
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We arrived in front of Harry's house as he walked out with his driver. I breathed heavily as my hands and knees shook. We all stepped out of the car and waited for Harry's orders. "Hurry and get in the car I can't be late for this meeting." He said with slight annoyance. Harry and his driver stepped in the vehicle and we stepped in ours and followed his car. We drove for hours I noticed we were leaving Morning-Ale-Valley as we got closer to the mountain side. I've never in my life left town and here I was with strangers and following the devil. We drove further and further as there was nothing but open land and the single road we drove on, the city was no longer visible. This was adding intensity to my anxiety. We arrived as I looked out the window and saw a massive tower built in to the mountains the structure was amazing as it blended into the Rocky Mountains. It was so secluded from the outside world and heavily secure by foreign military guards. We sat and waited as our vehicles got checked by the security gate. They wouldn't let us pass until Harry waved a hand granting us access. We drove in as the huge metal doors buzzed open and we drove into the underground tunnel of the mountain. I've never seen anything like this I was amazed.
I mean I was bad with tech but not stupid as to not understand what happened, my deduction was that the orb escaped being lost in space and time and somehow must have found its host but in a different timeline or a parallel world, and he was a teenager with love issues and teenage problems but things didn't stop at that point, as unlike the other Leto who forced the fusion with the orb, the orb this time decided on its own to fuse with this younger Leto and perhaps because of that, the fusion this time was different as the orb was the one that assimilated with him or should I say initiated the assimilation and even going as far as reshaping his body and cells to be a better host…
"Phew! Now that they are out of here," said Harold as he turned around in the direction of the creature, "I can finally fight you without any restraint." said Harold with excitement.
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