So far I'm enjoy it! You can really tell how your writing style has improved throughout the chapters. Good job man! I would say to be a little more careful with punctuation and be a little more aware of the pace of the story-- should keep the flow from going too fast but don't make it too slow with a bunch of details. Other than that, you did pretty good. Looking forward to more chapters.
That's an ugly ass cover photoCan't rate much as there are no releases yet, but I hope the story won't fall on the cliché subcategory of most transmigration novels.
So basically it just human form skill and not become real humanoid beast? And the MC dual cultivating with beast ?I think you need to add tag for harem and dual cultivating
I cant quite put into words how it feels to read this as when i began it was pretty cringy for the first 100 or so chapters then it slowly left only to be replaced by randomness wether it be with the stalling of the plot or most importantly semmingly making the main character op for the first 250 chapter only the then be useless and i wont even attemt to try to understand the thinking behind the mc thoughts all in all i would not recommend this as theirs far better ones in the same genre and it just feels like the story was made to feel cringy and a bit of a mess in terms of how its structured
A better summary I made for the novel after reading 40 chapters:Our protagonist is an average joe in his final year at a Medical University. One day, he gets lucky and obtains a Daily sign-in system that gives him rewards such as surgery skills, expensive watches, storage space, etc. Simultaneously, he also gets a text in the same day from a girl claiming to be his daughter who tells him the school belle is his future wife. He believes what she says to be the truth after video calling her and noticing that she has strikingly similar features to the school belle. The two agree to team up, and his future daughter sets him up with some advice to woo her mother, the school belle.What he doesn't know, however, is that both his "future wife" and his "future daughter" are two girls he used to be friends with in the past. They are just teaming up so that he can be together with the school belle.
Bring some tissue if you'll read this novel, you'll probably need it."Love is in the air, you cant touch but you can feel it, and you know it exist."well, bla bla bla.Please support this novel.:)
Great episode.Also buy marvel when it goes bankrupts not before that.And write harry potter.Great episode.Also buy marvel when it goes bankrupts not before that.And write harry potter.
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