I Became An Omega Wife Of Protagonist's Big Brother

There's nothing special about this novel, pretty seen this story lines in a lot of novels before. I don't know writers no longer term to build up new storylines.

has high potential can't wait to see more

English is not my mother languaje but here we go, i hope its readable.This is a novel that could have gone big, but became bad.The world in itself seems interesting but...I can understand that you want to make an OP mc. Okey good, but if you do it, do it with logic. Make a progression so the readers can enjoy how he gets OP. The way is done here is too fast, no development at old. Feels rushed.Many cliches used in a bad way, it feels forced and boring.The mc is supposed to be reincarnated from an old man, i cant feel any maturity in his way of thinking.Even with all this issues i congratulate the author for keep going with the novel.Its not my cup but if you enjoy it keep going.

What a great novel ruined by a terrible translator. Extremely sporadic releases even during premium.Will definitely be a fun read for people until you catch up

I just want to give my review of your story. Good storyline because it's interesting. Good writing skills. Please update at least once a week.

This is a really good book. Super easy to binge read and forget the time. Bad thing .... its been 5months since its last update so im unsure if its been dropped or not. Got my fingers crossed 🤞 that it'll get back on track though

Dear god.... It is nice to finally stumble across a story that actually feels like a decently-written piece of work, rather than the eye-clawingly painful stuff I typically find on here. Fatty's obviously got some skill, and it shows. You can certainly do a lot worse on this site, and I highly recommend giving this one a shot.

"Nope. But he did narrow down his target."