Good book but there are a few wrong pronouns and sometimes the names are messed up, but otherwise the story is nice and well paced and I enjoy it quite a bit
I really don't know what to say. If you don't like the author taking his time to develop the MC. If you don't like a slow paced(to me its plenty fast) then don't read this Novel.The author is taking his time to write the story in which this socially awkward otaku comes to a cultivation world. He is letting him learn so that he may eventually become the unfathomable patriarch. What i am saying is don't read if you don't like. Stop commenting on how bad it is. The only mistake the author made is that he is a newcomer if it was a seasoned author you all would be calling this the best novel...
I see a lot of potential here just after reading the first couple chapters. The unique way the dialogue is written is very attention grabbing. It's not what most authors do, and I think its an excellent style that is very similar to movie scripts which really helps push your imagination. I hope the author will continue leaning into that!The world is also VERY interesting and EXTREMELY unique, but in my opinion more time needs to be spent easing us into it. Its very jarring to go from one idea or concept to another with so little time in between. As a reader I like more time to invest in an interesting concept and having so many interesting concepts thrown at me one right after the other is very overwhelming.
I laughed so hard I have to hold the wall to keep myself standing. This little guy, hahaha, I tried convincing him that when his father marries Xiao Xi he can see her everyday... but he just run out.
as he had a fruit that was the size of an apple purple and color blue and green stripes. after a few bites Ezekiel waited 10 minutes see if there was any changes in the shadow he didn't see anything Shadow still continue to consume the fruit. so Ezekiel decided to take a couple fruits with he stuck 12 in his inventory continue to walk. he did the same thing for various other fruits 6 in total as he continued walking towards the mountain as he got closer he can see a small cave he walked towards the cave his instincts were telling them everything was fine. but just to be cautious as he since his shadow in ahead of him to make sure there was nothing dangerous inside 20 minutes later the shadow walked out shaking its head Ezekiel let out a sigh and walked into the cave with his shadow. then *Bing*
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