waiting for more updates. i hope the author can make story engaging and not make mc too overpowered. and also hope that authors doesn't go on long hiatus and label this as working on novel, when irl, he is fk-ahem goofing around

Nice Story i like it alot. Very intelligent

I just started this novel and its legit so good. I hope you keep it up. Please don't drop the book or anything. I look forward to following this journey alongside you.

Wow !!! This is one beautiful novel too begin. this book pulls you in from the first page. A perfect read for romance lovers who enjoy a story that tugs at the heartstrings

OMG!!!! THIS NOVEL GOT MY INTEREST IN JUST 1 CH💓A STRONGEST PERSON CREATING A LOWKEY SECTI CANT WAIT FOR 2ND CH LOVING IT KEEP IT UP 💪🏻

story is quite impressive and different but some subplots are quite cliche but it is interesting to read and entertaining let's see how it develops in the future

This story has good potential, really enjoy businessman mc. Hope mc apires to gain power and eternal life

its decent but u can tell it was written by an amateur the first 10 chapters were ok but his family felt inhumane in a way ur son just woke up from a hospital and u just left.... and u could tell it copied from tapov and the dream he had about the future was like tapov too and felt misplaced if u are tryna build suspense and act mysterious dont give so much info in one dream in the first 20 chapters the fights were insanely fast but in the physical assesment they were long ash and boring i guess every character seems so fake like ren he got close to the mc so fast its insane add some realism to these interactions also it has so much useless monolouge it completely ruins any fight that gets u excited

first time writing a review. but this book is definitely worth reading with one hand:). so far 24 chapters are out. I just sent 17 golden tickets. author if possible don't stop posting new chapters. one thing I noticed that kills alot of books is that the authors give up since books don't get power stones or golden tickets.

expecting better than before and I hope you can finish it this time Really appreciate ur effort.

Anticipating more chapters amigo. Keep up the good work🐔

Author is a master of suspense, no doubt. The  way he writes and describes scenes is just terrific. Good work, author. This is a story worth reading