His Daughter's Friends

The twist!!! Definitely worth reading

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At first When i was reading (around chapter 20) i tought this novel sEems to keep You from Being bored but ik Gets to bOring in The long run but after chapter 30/35 it really shows it can be fun to read without you knowing in the back of your head it will get boring after a couple dozen chapters

an interesting story to read, after reading up to 20 chapter, it refreshing to read this.

Overall it is readable, sadly there are many inconsistencies. Like it was established that Xuan(The MC) wasn't actually that much stronger than the second ranked player and rather always one because he fought with his brain and had ample preparations, yet somehow he completely trusts in a new technique and has no backup plan almost getting himself killed by someone with a fraction of his experience. Then there is the fact that such an experienced, smart individual despite knowing the location of a certain item ahead of time never found it in his previous account purely because it didn't have an aura, despite already knowing about upgradeable artifacts as his main weapon was one, he had zero reason not to have it yet he somehow didn't. I get it would be inconvenient to lose this artifact with the reset but it conflicts with his character. There are indeed more cases but you should get my point, to advance the plot the author made the MC inconsistent with his background setting which shows a lack of planning.

I've been searching for this novel to read.Please continue updating...I really like this one... Looking forward for this novel...I'll give my best support for this one✊☺️

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I love the story and its characters! The dialogues are great, but while the writing has minor issues, you will most likely not notice them so don’t worry about them. As for the storytelling, it’s done perfectly in my opinion, and I believe the author is doing great and is becoming even greater at doing it! Also, the characters are complex and the world-building is phenomenally good! Question for the author: Do you plan to continue the story because I truly find it great and hope to see how it ends? Also, how are you, author? And is there anything we can do to help?❤️❤️❤️