Half Magic | Book 2

Please please update

the plot, the character, the flow is so thrilling and captivating. the best book I've ever read. I love it. the only book that makes me excited the whole day, waiting for the next day to unlock more chapters

The writing quality and update stability are really great, but everything else isn't. First of all, the world design. If the lowest tier orb gives 50 strength or some bs like that, why was the giant's strength a B-rank skill if low tier orbs drop like pinecones from a pine tree? Also, the infinite focus ois total bull shît, and really doesn't work. I would understand if the mc had a ability that multiplies his focus by 10, 100 even, but infinite is too much. The mc went from 1-100 since the first chapter, and there really isn't any character development. The mc is a fücking coward and really dumb. Why would he sell skill books because they wasn't suiting the type of build he was doing? For example, the golem summon spell was just sold without an explantion. He isn't unkillable, and if a speed class rushes him while everything was down, he ded. The golem provides ample protection even when he disables the barrier, and will also stall the boss for him. Why did he use the giants strength skill book and sold the ice spikes? That giant strength book is the one that doesn't match your build, and who tf makes a 'build' in a apocaplyse setting? Wouldn't he keep every spell and orb and item since he is insanely conservative?

so... hmm okay??? dunno what to say but for me the story is ok(love it(not to that level)), so waiting until to chapter 10? to review again?(if i'm not feel lazy or my shy nerves snap)

I thought it would be good. I'm disappointed.

I gave it a chance. Read ten chapters, found myself skimming through it by the end. The prose needs a lot of work, the scenes have no suspense and the overall story just doesn't have anything that warrents my continued interest. This kid is already 18 and still a nobody. If it was intentional, then that just means the author has no foresight. LEGENDS are the best, and they show it early on. Messi being a prime example. Him STARTING at 18 already makes him far worse then his competitors it terms of future fame. I'm disappointed with it, but it seems like a trend with sport novels. Every author botches the beginning.

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When she was finally protected by the strangers she found loitering around the courtyard, the girl turned to look back at what was happening behind her. Ignoring her labored breathing and pounding head, the little girl watched as her savior met with the three men that had bravely placed themselves in her first line of defense.