guardian of heroes

"Princess Ji Yan'er has arrived!"

"Kahime, kamu sebaiknya ke atas membersihkan dirimu. Setelah itu kita makan malam bersama di sini. Kali ini aku akan memasak untuk keluarga Shitou, sebagai perayaan telah kembalinya dirimu pada keluarga dan sudah mengakhiri kejadian ini." kata Yuri berseri-seri.

As the last bit of the catchy song played itself out, an unintentionally loud "Ah" could be heard, as the same person quickly maneuvered themselves towards an empty pathway, composed mainly of dirt and rock.

Mr. Park walked casually into class with this hands tucked comfortably inside his pockets until he was in front of the smartboard and stopped, with Felix trailing behind him. Felix saw a wave of people looking up at him as he entered the room. Some with confused expressions on their faces, some who just didn't care and some who just looked completely indifferent.

"If no one cares for me, then I better die. Mother! Father! I am not important for you, after all. You always chose to believe that scoundrel. Miah! I can't even say that I love you..."

"Right over on those shelving units please. Thank you." She gestured with her tail, directing the workers based on the designations for each type of cargo, and the types of cargo were numerous. Supplies, spare machine parts, and technological items were in abundance, but so too were more costly luxury items.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

One, two, three. He shoots until the wolf stop moving, sweat, blood, and mucus surrounding his body, he keeps holding the dagger. He holds his right hand and withstands the weight of the mouth, as the wolf body went limp. He wants to escape but it was a wall of teeth, he didn't know if he could survive without being crushed unless he had a third or fourth arm, he needs Beatrice to let him out.

Name: Johnathan Edward Stainvo ll

Good start, interesting plot. but you should put a little though about your pacing and period placement. I hope you can keep up the story as well sharpening your skill. Story must be told.

Like every author, i am gonna rate my novel 5 stars. I want to give a message to all the readers (well not like i currently have any) that this novel is not about someone who is possessed by a devil or who a devil inside them from the birth. This novel is about a devil itself. The struggle and how a devils live his life in hell. This novel will make you question that the perception we have draw about the devils in our mind, is it really true? This novel will make you connect with different mythologies, you all will want to think about the mysteries. As an author, i want to create a novel which rivals the most greatest manga and anime of all time, One Piece. Doesn't mater even if my novel doesn't look good to all of you in the first volume but i promise you all, the more you will read, the more you will get into it.