Grayson's Obsession

This story was great at the beginning but as the story goes on, you get angrier and angrier by the dumb antagonists in the story. Don't read this, really.

Where the hell is a new chapter? its been 1 month!!! This is a premium book but there has been no update for a whole month, no note of why the translator is gone either!!

this seems good keep it up author                                                                                                                                                                                          

If your looking for a laugh, crude *** jokes, puns, English and face slapping... BOY IS THIS THE BOOK FOR YOU!!!If you are a feminist dear God do not read this or you will have an aneurysm 😂.*Ahem*... AnywaysThe story is great and the humor is just my cup of tea, may not be anyone else's but sure as hell is mine.The main character is a hoot being blunt to a fault. While when it comes to other characters, they have different enough personalities that I can distinguish them apart which is nice... And hell, I actually get a somewhat decent character description compared to some novels that only gave their characters names..The world??? Seems to be a normal New York, from what I have gotten from the description. Although there seems to be hints of it being a cultivation world.Writing quality? English. Great and haven't found any mistakes that make a grammar Nazi spit blood.Updating stability? Probably decent I don't know I haven't been around long enough to tell. So I shall rate that a five until further notice.

good and i like the characters they are very good and the story is also very good it has good twists and the suspense makes you want to keep reading on very well writen

Review time! 19 chapters.Well, the sypnosis explained what is going on. MC's girlfriend is a reincarnator from 6 years in the future.The world is going to be struck by a disaster when an ancient civilisation will be awakened and humanity will fight against it. Magic and all.Though in the first 19 chapters it will be the meeting of the mc and his girlfriend. Note: the girlfriend is very creepy and does not know how to court somebody. But at the end of the day the mc finally accepted that she's a reincarnator and became her boyfriend.When he accepts it he gains a system. A boyfriend model system. People with romantic interest and high favorability for the mc will give our mc a part of their abilities/stats. (This is a red flag for harem)Btw, mc's girlfriend is overpowered.Translation Quality: 5* (as always)SoU: 5* (as always)Story development: 3* (It's okay)Character design: 3* (No comment)World background: 3* (Just a modern world and future explained, nothing special)Overall score: 3.8Personal score: 3.5 (till chapter 19)

Second shameless review!!After writing more than a hundred chapters and being contracted, I felt I should do a review and say what I think about the book.Q. Will there be a harem?A. I have added multiple female leads to the story now and they all have things going on in their lives. Sophia and Marigold are traumatised and Kivela is trying to find her place in the world. Osmond also is rather young now, so I don't know. Q. Is the book dark?A. Yes it is. I have given warnings at the beginning of dark chapters.Q. Will there be a system?A. I have not added the tag because the story as of now, doesn't have a system. But I am planning to bring a character with a reincarnated character with a system in the future, so I guess I should add those tags.Q. Writing quality?A. I am a writer who has just started. English is not my first language. I am improving every day and with every word I write. And with that, I also have found out that my initial chapters are bad compared to the latest ones. So I am planning to go back and edit the whole thing once volume one is completed. Q. When will volume one be completed then?A.  It's in the last arc now. I am planning to write five volumes for this book if everything works accordingly.Q. Chapter update?A. I try to update one chapter a day. I am currently writing with my mobile and it is a hastle.And finally, thank you for reading my book. You can give ratings, reviews, power stones and gifts to show your support and love.

yan: I want to reincarnate in the protagonist of the story before he gets the magic cube two I want the sky path library with operating system that help me in that world of loyal preference only to me three I want mystical eyes of the perception of the faults so that I can It clears up the flaws in my crop plus it can shut down when I'm not using it.