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Don't know where to start from. So I'll start from anywhere.1) The writing quality got me like... Wow. Don't know about you, but I didn't see any error while reading.So good job author2) The story development is on a whole different level. Hope you keep it up.3) Character design is perfect. Especially our Alexander the first.4) Despite the time and dedication our author is putting in this novel. He still updates everyday, what a perfect author.5)World background; It is so perfect, that I feel like reincarnating there. Still hope on God anyway.
Having written over 100k+ words, I can tell you that this novel is kinda slow paced. You might feel like things are happening randomly at that point.The pace does go up a bit after around 50 chapters but it's kinda slow before that. Anyways, have fun reading!
At first, the story is admittedly a little confusing, but at the same time, it's interesting enough to make you want to understand more. Over the next chapters, everything starts getting clearer and you find out just how thought out the world-building is.The main character, Devon, seems to have enough character to make him feel alive and make one look forward to his development.The grammar and writing quality, in general, is good, I had no problem understanding anything.Looking forward to the next chapters!
Jack, an introvert who was bullied and taken advantage of because of his name which means doggie.His father was not good at handling money and made bad decisions regarding this and incurred a huge debt in which he now has to pay since his parents died.Now he has to survive with a worsening predicamentWill it bring Jack to insanity or salvation?I am loving the story thus far and everything's all good except for some grammatical errors but it could be cleared with an editor.This novel can reach great heightsAuthor please upload more and regularlyI am willing to spend my SP here daily if you fulfill these wishes;3
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