Chapter which was scheduled for today, has been postponed to tomorrow (31). It will be a special chapter. I appreciate everyone's patience.

I want Lucilia to sit on my face like I want it, I need It, i desire it, I wish for it, type shit, ya feel me? Overall peak chapter but like add a chapter were Lucilia shows that cake off to the MC

A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work—though there is still room for improvement

The idea is very good and somewhat new I hope that this novel will become famous because it deserves that

Just started reading and I’m already hooked! 🌙🏙️ The world-building is so vivid like you can practically feel the chaos of the slums and the contrast with the elite. Kyro is such a compelling character, and his journey is packed with action, mystery, and intrigue. The writing flows effortlessly, making every moment feel intense and real—I can’t wait to see what happens next! ⚡📚🔥

As expected from Sandkastle, this book, like her others, is also really good. I love how Zeno is unsuccessfully trying to be unsuccessful—literally failing at failing. I also enjoy the ironic remarks that reflect real-world moments, as well as the funny, offbeat details that aren't directly related to the plot but add to the charm. Her writing style continues to captivate me, blending humor with insightful observations. I can’t wait for the upcoming chapters!

This is truly a wonderful story, i thought i'd read a few more chapters before reviewing but fuck it, i'm so hooked. The pacing is good, the writing is excellent and the storyline is just interesting, not to mention the MCs hilarious nature😂Anyway i totally recommend this novel, you'll love it. Good job to the author once again👍

oui, j'ai besoin de cette histoire pour obtenir un regain de puissance

I’m at chapter 22 so far everything is good grammar is all right. Storytelling is amazing flow I enjoy it. It actually is one of my favorites now. I love how thy have a good consistency with showing the system. No joke it’s genuinely good. It doesn’t waste too much time. Their transaction is amazing compared to other novels where they add the most randomness things that make it confusing and it gets boring later on, but this novel is really good.

The story is excellent so far🎉 The description of the world and characters is wonderful and distinctive. the only thing I don't like is that the hero is a hyena😒 because I am clearly a cat person.😻 And when I saw the hyenas stealing the prey from an exhausted leopard since then I don't like them😾😡🤬😠. But this did not prevent me from enjoying the story and waiting for the next developments 😏. Keep up the great work.😍

Is there any ntr??..........Tell me before reading plz ..................................................................  ...... .m ...  .....                     

Right now, author has made the effort to improve his or her writing, and while its still jumping from here to there. It is still a good and relaxing story so far.The Updates that the author promised of 2-4 chapters is being keep, but it’s more like it’s being keep at 2 chapters every day.Story development is not great, but it’s not bad either. At most, I can tell that the author at least has a direction to head towards to.Character designs on the other hand, the cover is good but if we went with description of a the characters in the novel itself, only the character “Mirelle” has been describe. I hope to see a proper cover in the future and a description of the main character in the future. I still don’t know her name. Lol.The world feels alive at the very least. It isn’t as alive as LOTM since it’s just the start of the story, but with the recent chapters, it kinda feels alive. Like it feels a bit deep. I hope the world gets more alive and more deep as the story continues.If this continues to be free for another 10 to 15 chapters, I might review it again later.